Reviews For Changes in Definition
Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 
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Date: February 18, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Awkward
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Awkward
Oooh! I now have the image of a wet, dripping Jim in nothing but a towel. Thank you! I will be having wonderful dreams tonight. And, please update this soon! I want to see what will happen at work. Will the others notice anything different?
Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Awkward
Date: February 18, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Awkward
*sigh* just great. truly.
Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Admittance
Date: February 15, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Admittance
Yay. I think I may have actually purred while reading this. I really liked Pam's line about "this is coming out a hell of a lot better than I thought it would;" I could definitely hear it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this. I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible. I hope the rest of the chapters keep the same feeling.