Date: February 26, 2007 03:21 pm Title: She Can't Escape Her Feelings
haha, i am not one to read smut and i am 21. i would be scared if a 14 year old could write smut...
JAM makes me happy. And I totally want a Jim. I have a Jim (aka my betta fish)... but I want one that looks like John Krasinski!
Author's Response: Lol ikno that's why i really didn't want to write my story that way, it's waaay too weird. Hahaha. Yea. I think i'm like the youngest writer on here! I wish there was an award for that...cause I'm not going to win one for my lame stories! lol
Date: February 26, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Skiing and 'Card' Games
Ok, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Ski trip, hot chocolate, roaring fire, mmm...
Author's Response: I just put the next chapter up! Enjoy!
Date: February 26, 2007 11:51 am Title: The Phone Call
Great job with the characters' voices....I could really picture it happening this way.
Date: February 24, 2007 03:58 pm Title: The Phone Call
I like the basic plot idea; however, the grammar and spelling mistakes make it really difficult to get totally immersed in the storyline. Maybe using a beta reader or spell checking the text before you post it would be a wise move. Otherwise, keep writing- I like where the story is going! Also, I don't know if Jim or Pam would use the word "frik."
Author's Response: Yes, very true. I think i got to into it...i saw frik that's the problem. hahah
Date: February 24, 2007 12:27 pm Title: The Room Assignments
i just started watching friend again. last semester, i had stopped watching it a ton (because before i knew every episode by heart), and then it was always the office dvds on, and then i just started rewatching it. and i started with like season two, and it just totally reminded me of jim/pam. and then i read this!
Author's Response: Hahah! How ironic! I love friends!!
Date: February 24, 2007 11:54 am Title: The Room Assignments
while i'm really enjoying the idea of the story, i keep getting a bit lost, mostly because there are a lot of instances where you've gotten your homonyms mixed up (except/accept ... aloud/allowed, that kind of thing) and have quite a few grammar errors in general. i really like this story, and i think these mistakes could easily be fixed with a beta reader :)
Date: February 24, 2007 01:25 am Title: The Reveal of the Trip
Update soon!!!
Date: February 23, 2007 04:41 pm Title: The Reveal of the Trip
damn, that lil capter made me really really really want grilled cheese. random, but yes, it did. and i don't have bread. i will have to go shopping tomorrow... just wait until tomorrow and then i will eat grilled cheese. :)
Author's Response: Lol I love grilled cheese. I actually just made myself one after writing this... hah ironic. <3
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2007 03:54 pm Title: The Phone Call
Ooooh this is gonne be goooood!!! Bring it on.... Love it so far :) !!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sure you'll be anticipating Chatper 3 after reading teo when you get to it!!! I'm sooo excited to write it!!!
Date: February 23, 2007 03:26 pm Title: The Phone Call
i dunno, i think jim is way to confident in his ability to take on roy. roy is big and scary. haha. continue!