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Reviewer: TheCelticOne Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2022 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

I appreciate the Wegmans tribute. Wegmans got it's start in my home town, and I've never known life without it. Travelling to places where it doesn't exist used to be a shock, and meeting people who have just discovered it is a blast :)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2009 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

...least of all a sweet love story that had even our gruffest grip squealing like a schoolgirl when we watched the raw footage.

heeeeeeee!!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2008 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

Wegmans = Love!

I love how you include it in here :)

Reviewer: sharky Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

Loved this -- especially the news the crew had in the last chapter with the talking head.

Author's Response: I love it when Pam gets silly with the film crew....Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8: On Camera: Monday, Filmmaker's Notes

This was so, so good. And very original.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2007 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8: On Camera: Monday, Filmmaker's Notes

Loved that chapter. I love the play by play of the cameramen too.

Author's Response: In my mind, every member of the crew put in a dollar a week for the Jim and Pam pool.  That winner made A LOT of money!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

what a great format for a chapter!! and LOVED Pam's Talking Head. So, so, great cheeky little Beesly. So much fun!



Author's Response: Sassy! Pam is my favorite Pam of all the Pams...

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 8: On Camera: Monday, Filmmaker's Notes

Haha...this was awesome...Pam's TH was one my favorite fic ones ever!

Author's Response: Saucy Pam Th's may be my favorite thing to write....Thanks!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: Off Camera, Jim.

MaybeOnce, remember "there's no such thing as too much smut."  Feel free to use that as your mantra.

I love the part in the tub (yes, the all fours part!) and the quiet cozy time in front of the TV, which you did a great job conveying. 

Thanks for this! 



Author's Response: I am a firm (TWSS) believer that if there were more Jim and Pam smut in this world, we would be well on the way to achieving world peace.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: Off Camera, Pam.

I really like the format of this. Terrific smut - I love it! I really like the 1st & 2nd chapters, though.

Author's Response: Thanks...you know that, if these were real people, and if they got it together eventually, they really would be like rabbits for their first "dirty weekend" together....

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2007 01:16 am Title: Chapter 6: Off Camera, Pam.

Holy moly! Three chapters of smut?!? I think I love you! No....wait....I know I love you!

Author's Response: Three!   Yep....and I posted another after you reviewed.   Obviously, I have a dirty mind.   And, I love you, too, if only because you left me a review.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

So nice.  Love to see those two doing what they should have been doing ages ago.  Woohoo for JAM luvin'!

Author's Response: The more Jim/Pam lovin' the happier we all are.....it's just that simple....

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

But now, now he felt like he could not breathe deeply enough to inhale her scent, he could not open his eyes widely enough to see her beauty, he could not listen hard enough to fully hear her laughter.   Because it was her.   It was Pam.  

THAT was beautiful. My absolute favorite part! Thanks so much for this story!



Author's Response: Aw, thanks!  

Reviewer: amyryd Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

"Clearly, she had rendered him into some sort of gelatinous mass of formerly Jimness" This is a GREAT line and a fantastic story!

Author's Response: Thanks!   I like sex that's so good you're rendered incoherent.....

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 02:11 am Title: Chapter 3: On Camera, after the Hiatus

Yeah.   THAT'S going to change.  

Haha! Awesome.

 

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2007 02:10 am Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

I really like this prologue, the idea of the crew being so captivated.

Author's Response: Thanks!   I figure there is no way they could spend that much time with the folk and not get invested....

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

Thanks for this story.  Some JAM lovin' with no Karen in sight (who doesn't love that?[/Jim]) Thank god for fanfic to get us through this loonnng break!

Author's Response: Karen who?

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

Wegmens. Best. Store. Ever. They have just about everything. Sans Jam smut. But you seemed to add that just fine. Love it!

Author's Response:

I recently moved from Wegmans territory to non-Wegmans territory. 

 I am still mourning my loss, deeply.  Life without Basting Oil, Pan Searing Flour, and Almond Stuffed Greek Olives has been like a frozen sledgehammer to the grief bone.

Reviewer: tigger Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

I really liked it overall. It was sweet and seemed so, er, healthy relationshipwise, so peaceful, so normal-at-its-best. The lanuguage also leaves nothing to ask for. The comparisons and metaphores are top-notch, and you never fail to vocalise Jim or Pam properly - they seem to be the same people as on the show, only with us having more insight into their feelings.

Author's Response:

Plus, they're naked!

 

Thanks for the detailed review, I appreciate it! 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 11:48 am Title: Chapter 5: Off Camera: Jim

very nice - and who doesn't love a good (bad?) Kung Fu movie???

Author's Response: I think that by definition a good Kung Fu movie *IS* a bad Kung Fu movie....It's delicious awfulness is what makes it so entertaining. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2007 11:29 am Title: Chapter 4: Off Camera: Pam

his beautiful name again and again because she could finally say it as it was meant to be said.

Amen. Say it with passion and grace and lust. :D



Author's Response:

NeverEnoughJam, NeverEnoughJam, NeverEnoughJam!      

 Oh...you were talking about Pam saying Jim's name....in the story....color me embarrassed.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: Off Camera: Pam

more! more more more! love it


Author's Response: I live to serve.........

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1: The Filmaker

Wow, ditto what Kaystar said. This could be just the ticket to make this long hiatus bearable. (Now if only TO was on HBO, and something like this could actually happen!) Looking forward to Chapter 5.


Author's Response: Dude, I think even HBO would blanch at this one....I don't know what kind of hormonal high I was on with this story, but I"m sure Mr. Maybe Once appreciated it.....

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Off Camera: Pam

Wow, that was hot. You have quite a talent for erotic Jam-iness that I'm glad you share with us.  (FYI - This was too lovely to call smut!)

Author's Response: Thanks!   I've never written about the sex before....so it was a fun experiment.....

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: Off Camera: Pam

I love this.  The TH in chapter 3 especially seemed spot on.  Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I had more fun than I expected with Pam in this story....I'm going back to the show with a new appreciation for her...

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