Date: February 23, 2007 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! Continue! NOW!
I love the format of this and I really need you to drop whatever you're doing and write chapter two. 'Kay?
Author's Response: I got an Eeeek! And a long one! That's so exciting to me! So far the general consensus seems to be that I should write a second chapter, so I guess I'll have to. :) BTW, I'm crazy about your story "Revelations". I promise to reread it and leave a good review sometime in the near future. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: February 23, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't notice any glaring mistakes, and i'm interested to see where you'd go with this. do some more on it. please.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review, and thanks for letting me know that you didn't notice any mistakes. I tend to pick up on everyone's grammar errors except my own, and then I get really embarrassed later when I discover how many errors I've made, so I appreciate you letting me know. :)
Date: February 23, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. So good. You have the voices down very well. And between the "I've got your back" and all the other messages, I think Jim now has a good idea of what has gone down. And hey, loving the Creed and the Merideth. That was... wow.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It's harder than I thought it would be to appropriately describe the different things the actors bring to their roles when writing dialogue, so I really appreciate the comment about their voices. I love that you call them "the" Creed and "the Meredith. What's not to love about them? :)