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Reviewer: justkaren Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heartbreaking and realistic.  Ditto Ditto Ditto.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2007 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is heartbreaking. It's too realistic. The idea that we don't get our happily-ever-after with Pam & Jim is too frightening to contemplate. But you make it real here- you make it sing.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Crap, you just broke my heart. I know that this could take place with either one, depending on the time, but it's Roy/Pam, and that's what makes me sniffle. I didn't think it could happen, but you've made it completely possible. Darn. 

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love that, depending on when this takes place, Pam could be with either man. Well done. And besides that, a good, awkward scene.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was heartbreakingly beautiful.  Wonderful use of the 5 elements. I've never imagined Roy and Pam together after she gets together with Jim and it doesn't work out.

Reviewer: sophia_helix Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Augh. That's the sound of my heart breaking.

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohh, this is so good. Brava!

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