Date: February 27, 2007 02:08 am Title: Stirred
Yay! Go Jim! And THANK GOODNESS that he's not going to leave Pam alone right now. He's such an awesome guy. Thanks so much for writing! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: February 27, 2007 12:30 am Title: Stirred
LOL, I was going to say he such a horrible, terrible person, but I was cheering for him every single step of the way, so. If he goes back to Karen, though, I'm going to have to spam your inbox. I have your [e-mail] address! =P
I liked Jim's POV, here. Not standard Jim!POV, heh.
Cannot wait, at all, for an update, so hurry up and get to it!
Date: February 26, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Stirred
I love this story! You've got Jim down cold! Keep writing, i really want to know what happens when Jim gets to Pam.
Date: February 26, 2007 10:30 pm Title: Stirred
Yay! Go Jim! Hurry over to Pam's! Excellent breakup of Jim & Karen, BTW
Date: February 26, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Stirred
Wow. I've never read such a realistic break up scenarior for Jim and Karen. I am so loving this story. Please continue!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Shaken
wow. so not only awesome with the fluff, but the angst! lovefool what can't you write? soooooo awesome!! MORE!!!!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Shaken
I think you've done a great job with the angst in this story. I could almost feel Pam's fear when Roy was banging at the door, and I was a bit afraid for her myself. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please hurry and post!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Shaken
Very good! Now you know, it doesn't have to end all angsty; just write that telephone call as chapter 2!! :-)
Date: February 26, 2007 11:26 am Title: Shaken
I'm curious to see what happens next. One quick spelling error - you "pour" a drink, not "poor". (Well, maybe at Poor Richards they "poor"?) I loved how Pam knew that the yelling would change to crying and pleading, but (again) curious about why the crying and pleading didn't happen THIS time. Hmmm. I will await the next chapter! Nice job.
Date: February 26, 2007 06:58 am Title: Shaken
i like it. poor pam. i alredy felt like she has gone through so much and this yeah. its good. and mtt is bein weird so hopefully you won't get this review like 4 times or something (and hopefully youwill get it once)
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Shaken
Oh WOW. You have to continue this ASAP. So scary, and yet so compelling. I have to know what happens next--please! Thanks for writing it!
Date: February 25, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Shaken
So glad to see that this isn't completed, because I'm dying to know what happens next. Your writing is really beautiful, especially the moment with the dropped wine glass. I could see it happening in slow motion. Just awesome.