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Reviewer: jollyholly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2007 11:34 pm Title: While the cat is away....

Very much enjoyed this and would love to see more..(hint,hint) thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 10:03 am Title: While the cat is away....

I was just looking for something else and this caught my eye.  It's lovely.  I assume you have left it behind and are not going to continue, but I just wanted to let you know how much I liked it.

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2006 01:37 am Title: While the cat is away....

Great start, I am excited to read more!

Reviewer: princesslisa Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 05:36 pm Title: While the cat is away....

I'm excited for the next installment!

Author's Response: :) Thanks - it's coming along!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 04:29 pm Title: While the cat is away....

This is an impresssive first fic! really enjoyed it and can't wait to read Chapter 2. I love this line: "How is it possible to be blind to so much of what’s happening right in front of you?"

Author's Response: Thanks kaystar - the next chapter will delve deeper into that particular notion - stay tuned!

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 02:50 pm Title: While the cat is away....

Good job on your first fic. Mischievous Pam is funny. Please continue...

Author's Response: Thanks bonorocks (I totally agree with your name by the way). Even when the story takes serious turns, there will be humour b/c that's just who I am. I try anyway. :)

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 02:46 pm Title: While the cat is away....

Love the way you're writing this--and really excited about the premise. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 02:28 pm Title: While the cat is away....

Love the way you're writing this--and really excited about the premise. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks yippee - I'm writing chapter 2 now. I may even get it posted later today. We'll see how it goes.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:42 pm Title: While the cat is away....

What an interesting concept you have going here! I can't wait to read your next chapters...I also really like your style. You've got great rythm.

And...YAY FOR CANADIAN SPELLING!

Author's Response: You guys are seriously making my day with these reviews. I have long been a writer (first fanfic though) and have never showed it to people before. Your positive comments are making this a great experience. I'm working on chapter 2 as we speak. (And Whoo Hoo Canada!)

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 01:38 pm Title: While the cat is away....

this is really interesting! i always like stories that revolve around the footage being aired or seen. yay! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you - I also love stories where the footage is viewed. The challenge was coming up with a new way for that to happen.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 12:22 pm Title: While the cat is away....

Fantastic first installment. I love Pam's trip around the office to find someone to talk to.

Author's Response: Thanks! As much as I LOVE Jim and Pam, I'm so enamoured with the rest of the characters that I can't resist writing them. It's a fun challenge to incorporate such different personalities.

Reviewer: agd300 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2006 11:24 am Title: While the cat is away....

I'm hooked, it's official. Nice take on everything. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I promise to update as soon as possible. :)

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