Date: May 22, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Before the taking of a toast and tea
I like that Karen wasn't as crazy as she sounded. And asparagus! Hee! Fluffy goodness!
Date: May 22, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
TooMuchTrouble> What? Just flat out ask her what she wants? Are you nuts, McPants??
Ahaha! Oh Jim. Follow your own advice, dummy. Also? I'm glad you held off on the online sex. That might have been crossing the line. Also? Does Pam know? Because I think she might be on to him. Look out! Must. Keep. Reading.
Date: May 22, 2007 09:46 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Oh, Jim, you are in so much trouble. A picture in your wallet? The promise of online sex? What have you gotten yourself into?
Date: May 22, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.
Flirting? Invitations to meet in person? Eek! I love it.
Date: May 22, 2007 09:21 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument
Why is Pam being weird? How am I supposed to keep from skipping to the end? Vexin!!! You are wonderful and evil, Moxie.
Date: May 22, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
I love, love, love the Toby scene (I want them to be better friends on the show!) and Periwinkle! That's the colour I always call that dress, and I'm excited to know I am backed up by Crayola.
Date: May 22, 2007 09:16 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.
Eeek! Dangerous territory! Jim is as hooked as I am. Hurrah! Next!
Date: May 22, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Oh, man, Karen scares me a little. I really like how Jim is trying to figure out how to pretend to be distant with Pam. You'll probably never see this comment, buried way back in the thousands, but right now I'm settling in for the long haul with a glass of wine and some good music. This will totally be worth the wait, I can tell.
Date: May 22, 2007 09:11 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Moxie, what the heck do I even say? First of all I just want to say thank you for giving us such a gift! Seriously, I know it sounds corny but during a season that was so full of angst, you don't know how many times this story just made me smile and laugh out loud and sigh, when the show wasn't doing that. Thank you, thank you, thank you so so so much for this story. It was unique and fun and just provided so much entertainment for so many of us. This last chapter did not disappoint in any way. It was well worth the wait. Seriously...those pants alone made it a gem (along with many other things). Thanks again! I can not wait to read the sequal!!!
Date: May 22, 2007 08:54 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
I remember when I first started reading this on a whim, just to keep from working on some paper or other, then somehow, you slowly sucked me in until it wasn't just when I had time to procrastinate that I read...it was even when I was completely busy. I dropped everything to read. I procrastinated by waiting around for you to post the next chapter! You've created a story AND a sickness! :)
Anyway, amazing job with the whole story. The ending was beautiful and sweet and funny and just..perfect. I hope Jim tells Pam where the name came from in the sequel! See you then!!!
Date: May 22, 2007 08:53 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
So today is/was my birthday and it kinda sucked...but having the last chapter of one of my favorite stories posted on it? Made it much better! LOVED THIS???
And did I read sequel???? HEHEHEHE :-)
Date: May 22, 2007 08:38 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Just lovely, Moxie. Thank you for all the good and Squirrelly times! I'll be watching for that sequel, but make sure to take a little time to relax first if you need to! Perhaps you should relax in some of those cute squirrel (Mc)pants.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 08:00 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
*dies*
Oh Moxie, that was perfect. I want to read it over and over and over again, and I will, I'm sure. Such a perfect ending. I can't wait for the sequel!
The McPants- loved. Can totally picture Jim wearing them and it being so oddly sexy. I loved all the intimate, whispering flirtations. Gah!
I'm sure you know how loved this story has been- 800+ reviews and counting! Just want you to know that I can't remember a fic in any fandom that has actually made me fall more in love with a couple than I already was. You win all the prizes and all the gold stars! Standing ovation!
Date: May 22, 2007 07:38 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
At last the conclusion! Oh Squirrel McPants. How I'll miss thee. I would have loved to see the chat conversation, but! We can't have it all. The red pants with squirrels on them were a great touch.
Date: May 22, 2007 07:18 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Oh wow...those squirrel pants complete the story. Hilarious.
Is Vexin going to be an accomplice in the 12 Labors? I want to know who she is!!!
Thank you for this wonderful fic :)
Date: May 22, 2007 06:58 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Oh, Moxie! Excellent ending to a brilliant epic.
I have seriously loved every minute of this and I thank you for the enjoyment it has provided me.
For sure my favorite part, besides the too-fun premise is how perfectly in character you write them. Bravo.
I cannot wait for a rainy day to sit down and read it all over again. Damnit, it is summer. Well, I am sure that 'rainy' day will come sooner rather than later for me.
Awesome.
Date: May 22, 2007 06:21 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
A wonderful ending to an utterly fantastic story. All hail Moxie, the queen of fanfiction.
Date: May 22, 2007 05:53 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
I love this story. What a beauty conclusion. I don't want to say "ending" because I sincerely hope this will not be the last we hear from the legendary "Squirrel McPants."
I'm gonna read it all over again from the beginning! :-) Yay for Moxie!
Date: May 22, 2007 04:39 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
awww, such a perfect ending! i love the tiny little details you add in like the pants and tie and whatnot, it just adds an extra layer to the story.
just one more awww. so cute.
Date: May 22, 2007 03:59 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Okay, Mox...you know I was skeptical when you first showed me those squirrel jammies - but you pulled it off with your usual finesse. I should have trusted Pam to get him out of them, just as easily as she got him into them ;-) Great finale for a classic epic tale (long bushy tail?) Now onto the sequel, you sorceress, you.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 03:45 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
That was just wonderful. I think I'm in love. I cannot believe you went to the trouble of finding squirrel pants. I admire your dedication to your story. Alas, that is why you are the master. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to besides the actual show.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 03:44 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
*sigh* Awesome. Just... awesome. Love every word. Love Vixen Pam, love Jim, love the pizzas, everything. But I ESPECIALLY love those PJ's! Thanks to you, my friends give me weird looks because of the girly sqees whenever I see or hear anything squirrel-related.
There is more coming, right? Right?
Date: May 22, 2007 03:03 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Well, tsk tsk. I wanted to FINALLY find out what the heck Squirrel McPants meant! LOL A great read, completely worth the wait. Thanks so much for entertaining us lot of excitable fans.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 03:00 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Aw! It's the end of an era! Well, I guess a tish under an era, but still. It was such fun reading this story, and while I'm a little sad it's over, you wrote a great ending that keeps everything open for a sequel. Great job, and thank you for entertaining us all.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 02:14 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.
Perfectly beautiful ending to one amazing story, Moxie. The progression from the time he arrived at her door was sweet and fun and so them. There aren't really words to express how much I've enjoyed this story and how utterly impressed I am with you for writing it! As always, you rock!