10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Wow! I'm totally hooked on this story! I am really wondering if Pam knows that Squirrel is Jim or not. I just have an inkling that she does. Please keep the chapters coming. I want more!
Date: April 03, 2007 07:36 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Moxie, I'm dying here. New chapter please!
Date: April 02, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Wow. -Jim
Date: April 01, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
this vexin character is killing me! it's you isn't it? who is it!?!?!?! i wanna know! and i'm pretty sure pam doesn't know anymore.. gah.. i'm dying.. love it as usual... still, i'm dying...
Date: April 01, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Well, ixnay on the cybersex. It would have been hot, but I can understand Jim's thought process here. In his mind, he'd much prefer to have Pam for real. I love how he's competing with his own alter ego for Pam's affections. Great job as always, Moxie!
Date: April 01, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Pam certainly doesn't respond well to being told that she should really think about what she wants and not let opportunities just pass her by, does she? Poor girl. I hope this doesn't stop they're chatting sessions, unless it means that he starts talking to her *as Jim* more...
Date: April 01, 2007 10:22 am Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Aw. Poor Jim... And Pam... I need to know what happens next! Does she follow his advice? She should follow his advice. Even if he was jerkish about it. Please update soon.
Date: March 31, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
OMG!!!! Moxie, I JUST LOVE YOU! This conversation was good and long (TWSS) and intense! They were both getting pretty heated over this whole idea of her needing to make a move with Jim. Man I hope she doesn't let her pride get in the way. I hope she takes McPants advice!!! It sounds like Jim is free to take her up on it now that Karen is nearly out the door! COME ON GUYS!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 31, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Angsty!! I'm really curious about what will happen next! I don't think Vexin has a whole lot of doubt that Squirrel = Mr. Wonderful!
Jim, just go over to her place with a horror movie! Kiss her and beg forgiveness for your online deception! Listen to your own advice about how it doesn't matter who goes first!
Get to the next chapter when you can. Remember, "Sleeping... better than not."
Date: March 31, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Wow what a great chapter. So much was said and wasn't Pam the little hussy.
Date: March 31, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Ouch. I loved how naturally the argument came and the conversation fell apart. It seems very like Jim to end up jealous of his own damn self! Gah! Just one of you, frickin say something already!!
Date: March 31, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
As much as I've been praying for cyber-sex (which just sounds uber-creepy... I'm a freak) I'm sort of glad that Jim handled this this way. He's right, and he gave Pam a good kick in the pants, which she needs. However, that being said, I would not be adverse to seeing cyber-sex in future chapters. Like I said--freak.
Also, you pretty much ROCK my socks off.
Date: March 31, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Moxie! Hurry up! Your cliffhangers are as bad as the show's! Hurry up! (I want to know what Pam's idea of cyber sex is too. Any way you can work that in there???)
Date: March 31, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Okay, another great chapter as usual, but I'm hoping Pam has an inkling that it is Jim. Otherwise, the attempt to initiate cyber sex is giving me traumatic flashbacks to my freshman roommate and the parade of creepy guys she hooked up with online. I'm a little worried about how deep Jim is getting into all this, but I'm excited to see what happens next.
Date: March 31, 2007 04:48 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Oh my goodness! I LOVE this story. I just hope that every thing turns out for Jim and Pam in the end. But I hafta say, I hope for an update everytime I come here, and when there is one, I jump up and down a little in my seat. Please write more now!!
Date: March 31, 2007 04:41 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Ohh gosh ,this is getting goooddddd !
Date: March 31, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Whew. I'm glad it didn't go where it could have gone, and I loved the explanation about Jim being jealous of himself. However, the new chapter has left me worrying about SaintSimon and his person. And of course the fact that Pam will meet up with guys she doesn't know. I'm still holding out a vestige of hope that Pam knows she's talking to Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2007 03:39 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Wow...Jim just keeps getting himself deeper and deeper into this, doesn't he? I'm starting to wonder if there is anyway he can salvage this. (Great chapter, I'm just starting to worry for Pam's & Jim's feelings.)
Date: March 31, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Noo! We were so so close to the cybersex ;) Hee! I am way too into your story here, Mox. What a great twist though, being jealous of himself?? Oh Jim, encourage her! Encourage!!!
Date: March 31, 2007 03:01 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Ouch. That didn't go well. Hopefully Pam will take Squirrel/Jim's advice to heart. Though I can't blame Jim for being a bit apprehensive about the whole situation since Pam doesn't seem to know it is him. Anxious to see where this is going!! Thanks you for updating!
Date: March 31, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
*stomps foot* No online sex? Humf.
But you're forgiven for writing a very exciting chapter. I completely understand Jim's rationale- he's certainly jealous of himself and to that end he should totally just tell Pam the truth (as I suspect she's on to him and his "argument" with her is just succeeding in creating more distance for them) He can't allow her to do something she might regret and his arguments were all perfectly on track- she'd be betraying her love for Jim if she allowed herself to continue.
So much intrigue and drama. I love it!!!!!
Date: March 31, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
When I read a new chapter of Squirrel, its like this dance between my brain and my scrolling finger begins. I want to read it as slowly as possible, savor it, make it last as long as I can (TWSS), and then this other part of me wants to just devour it and devlishly tells me to read it as fast as I can, because I just HAVE to know how the new chapter ends!
I love the direction this chapter took. I'm now pretty sure Pam doesn't know. Vexin knows, oh, Vexin knows, but I don't think she's filled Pam in. Should I be curious about SaintSimon's someone? Cause I am.
Date: March 31, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Great! And a House mention, woo!
Date: March 31, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Boddington;s beer reminded me of Friends. :)
And if you didn't see the post on the MTT message boards, http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v129/BrokenPetal/n19100548_30317931_7646.jpg
Its squirrels in love!
And House. :). He is such an unlikely sex symbol, but, I like him tooooooo! And, Blues Clues :). Okay, I watch that show too much. With kids. Not by myself. Cause that would be a tad bit to sad.
Damn, I am giggling like mad reading this, its just too awesome.
I can really picture that conversation happening... like the arguing and stuff. because when i talk to my friends, its like, sometimes i just want them to agree with me, but more often than not, they argue, and it gets more accomplished.
I can't wait for more! Just drink lots and lots of caffene. That should help with the sleep issue :)
Date: March 31, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Oh my! I love how Jim was trying to get Pam to admit his love for her...without her knowing it's him. And that's exactly what she needs...prodding. She won't do it on her own.
Lovely chapter...what's next?