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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels

OMG this is so good, I cannot believe Jim is spying on Pam, ahhh I hope she doesn't get too mad

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2008 06:48 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I love this already, can't wait to see where you're taking this.

Reviewer: SkeetShruting Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2008 03:50 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I read this after so many people recommended it. I really loved it-you have a gift!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2008 02:36 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

I've read this 3 times simply a masterpiece!

B



Author's Response:

My dear, you need a hobby.  ;-)

(Though I'm beyond pleased you liked it so much.)  I'm going to try and write more on the other WIPs tonight.

 

Reviewer: JustREAL Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2008 01:46 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Oh my Gosh, this story has to be one of the best I've ever read!!!!

Reviewer: Sonni Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2008 07:11 am Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

Thank you so much for this. I swear, this is the best piece of fan fiction I have read so far, and I've read quite a lot in the past month or so. I stayed up until 4am reading this.
It was just so... in character, so well-written and it made me tear up on occasional moments and go "awww" at least 2 million times, lol. That's what it's supposed to be like ;) JAM love everywhere. he he
I'll definitely read more of your fan fiction now, seeing as this was brilliant.

Reviewer: Pumples Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2008 09:23 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I really loved this story. It's the first I've read on MTT, and definately well recommended. Couldn't put it down - if you know what I mean?

Reviewer: Jam_Fan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2008 01:40 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

I couldn't stop reading once I started & ended up going to bed at 4am!! I loved it!!! The part where Pam tells Matt/Jim that's not his real name... absolutely brilliant! What a moment!! I loved the whole thing - Excellent work :)

Reviewer: mapetiteange Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 11:38 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I love this story! I'm not quite done reading it yet, but it's awesome so far. I'm a regular in the OTCR (there atleast once a day) and I can see how it influenced you to write this!

Reviewer: lightbulb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2007 05:39 am Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

Brilliant!
An amazing fic! I've just spent HOURS of my life reading this all... but I don't regret it! I just couldn't stop!

It made me laugh, and 'awwww', and get angry at Karen on several occasions!

Brilliant fic. You're a great writer. :)

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2007 09:44 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

ok, i read this story before i was registered, so i just had to come and comment! this story is amazing! absolutely amazing. yeah. i'm sure this has been said about a million times, but i just had to make it a million and one!

Reviewer: overreaction Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 07:52 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Favorite fic on this website. And all other fic websites. There are just too many good lines. I can't copy and paste them all. LoL. 'Nuff said.

Reviewer: Ampay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 02:05 pm Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

i LOVE that tie! I was scared you were gonna let them walk away without a kiss there for a second- Thank you for failing to disappoint :D

Reviewer: Ampay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 01:44 pm Title: No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be

YAY! It was perfect! P-E-R-F-E-C-T!!!!!

What an amazing story- so funny and so sweet and s true to Jim and Pam! I can't wait to finish it :D

Reviewer: Ampay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 01:18 pm Title: For I have known them all already, known them all

WHHHEEEEEEE!!! I am SO SO EXCITED!!!
.. No really.. WHEEEE!!!!

Reviewer: Ampay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair

AWWW!!! (I actually Aww'd-out-loud)

Crayons are the best! I can't wait to keep reading!

Reviewer: Ampay Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2007 02:41 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

AWWWW!
I'm really dreading when Pam finds all this out... I can imagine she will not be a happy camper.
I can't wait to finish it.. and also find out who the heck Vexin is. I am SO EXCITED!

Reviewer: Carolynfromla Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2007 01:48 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

I know I'm coming late to the party, but I just want to express my immense admiration for this story - the plot, the emotion, and especially the dialog, which you have a real knack for. You are very, very talented, and I thank you for sharing it. Even if I'm staying up waaay too late on a work night because I CAN'T STOP READING THIS STORY!

Reviewer: Jadeey Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2007 01:38 am Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

Hi!  I just finished reading this entire story.  I am new to the Jam fanfiction world.  (Although I have been a long-time reader/writer in the Harry Potter and House worlds).  However, despite my newness I ADORE Jim and Pam.

 This story was great.  It made my heart skip a beat a couple of times, particularly when Pam told Jim that she wanted him to change his name to his real, real name and not Matt.  

 I have to make a shocking admission here and say that I sympathised greatly with Jim in this story and am really glad it worked out well for him in the end.  As shocking a thing as it is to do I understand his reasons for creating a persona and injecting himself into Pam's online world.  I mainly understand because I, unfortunately did something extremely (and disturbingly) similar about 5 years ago.  My story didn't have a happy ending but I am so very glad that Jim's did.

 Wow this has been long.  Basically, you are a great writer.  I love how you capture the very elements that make Jim and Pam themselves.  As I read your writing I can see how it would fit in the real-world of the show.  (Real-world of the show?  I guess that doesn't quite make sense but you know what I mean)  Okay I'm going to stop rambling now and go read some more of your Jam stories!

Reviewer: Bklyangel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets

I need to tell you that I normally hate im's in fics. But I adore this.

Reviewer: Sevian Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2007 07:58 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

Thanks for a very entertaining story!  I was able to escape into this fun world for several hours today, and I really enjoyed the ride!  (TWSS)  Great writing! 

Reviewer: chiquiti Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 09:18 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

So since I got around to making an account to review & add favorite fics/ authors, I had to come back to this one, which I read a little bit ago, and is one of my absolute favourites!!!

I would kill for an "epilogue" where Jim confesses to the chat room and actually does some of the other things on the list. But even without that.. awesome!



Author's Response:

You won't have to commit a felony, chiquiti - I am currently working on such an epilogue!  I'm so glad you liked the story! Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: Kris83 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2007 09:11 pm Title: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

This was a FANTASTIC fic!!! I thought it was a really good idea that when you had Jim enter the chats that you included what was already going on in the chat (does that make sense?). My favorite line: "Jim wondered if this is what a panic attack felt like." I think that captured the moment he found out Pam knew the truth perfectly.

Reviewer: Zach Swafford Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 01:57 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

888th review.  Had to do it.  Good story.  Can't wait for the sequel.

Reviewer: Ellelque Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 09:52 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I really enjoyed this story.  I spent the whole evening reading it.  But I have to say, I so wanted Jim to get in his car at the end and drive over and take her into his arms!  Maybe it would be raining that night, she opens the door and he is there, drenched and hunger in his eyes.  I really felt his torment and pain.  I just wanted a ending with a really BIG BANG!  But I did really enjoy it.  Made my toes tingle.

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