Date: March 22, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
*Squee* That favorite color bit at the end was excellent. It made me squeal like the little fan girl I am....haha...please update soon!! :)
Date: March 22, 2007 02:53 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
I loved the sweetness of the interaction between Jim and Dwight! Another great chapter, which really pushed the plot forward, even without the online interaction.
Date: March 22, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will review with greater articulation when the overwhelming sense of adorableness has waned off a bit. :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2007 07:56 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
I loved the last chapters, really did! It's great you make things a little more difficult for these two, to assure this time they'll do everything right.
Also, I loved the Jim's game with Pam. He'll do she love him even more. :)
Thanks for the update!
10 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2007 06:42 am Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Wow, I think I just melted a little. I loved that ending. It's so appropriate for Pam and Jim. :) And the fact that Pam gave him the crayon? Brilliant.
I'm a huge fan of this story but I've only now gotten around to reviewing. I'm a slacker, and I know this. :) Anyway, I seriously love the idea of Jim spying on Pam behind the identity of Squirrel McPants (which, by the way, is a hilarious pseudonym!). This story is so much fun to read because of how well you've nailed the characters' voices and actions. It doesn't hurt that you have a lovely way with words, either. ;) Keep up the great work, moxie! I'm eagerly awaiting another chapter!
Date: March 22, 2007 06:28 am Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Aw! Sweet! But oy - will those two never have a clear path to each other?
Date: March 22, 2007 06:25 am Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
k, now that was just too sweet of Jim to say. Great chapter.
Date: March 22, 2007 12:17 am Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
This is the best chapter so far. Love it!!!
Date: March 21, 2007 11:55 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
My "aww"s gradually got louder at this part:
“What was the color of your dress last year?”
So lovely! I heart you! :D
Date: March 21, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Oh my god! I love Crayola crayons even more now! Brilliant, Moxie! Jim is just so confident and perfectly sweet without being overly obvious since learning so much in the chat room.
I cannot wait to read what WD has to say to her friends in the chat room about Mr. Wonderful.
And you are just slightly evil ending the chapter right there, without getting to learn Pam's response... evil in a really, really, really good way. And completely reminiscent of the show.
Date: March 21, 2007 10:48 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Oooooh...that periwinkle crayon thing = Office writer genius. Love it!
Date: March 21, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
wow! Great ending to the chapter. If she doesn't pounce on him immediately... she's crazy.
Date: March 21, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
OH MY GOD....YOU are a GENIUS. That connection was FABULOUS!!!!! Here I was thinking I was going to be dying because they wouldn't get to have any interaction at work, and you just made it wonderful. Perwinkle, Jim's favorite color, casino night dress...::sigh:: again - Genius. Really.
Date: March 21, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Periwinkle!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And yes, I love the smell of Crayola's too. I thought I was the only one. Oh, and Sharpies. And packets of lined paper.
Okay, just school supplies in general smell really good to me.
I love you. I love this story.
Thanks so much.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 21, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
i think i swooned. thank you.
Date: March 21, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Glad to see more of this. There's one tiny typo, I think. Should this "by" be "but"? "Of course I will. I'm your HR representative, by I'm also you're friend. I'll help in any way I can.” Also, I hate to be such a nitpicker, but "I hope you will chose more wisely in the future, but for now," should have "choose," not "chose." I'm only saying this because I am enjoying this story so much, and it could be just that little teeny tiny bit more perfect. I look forward to more, hopefully soon?
Date: March 21, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
I love so many things...I love that Pam did ask her question to Jim as requested by Squirrel McPants, I loved Jim's response, I love that he doesn't want Pam to think he's not interested, I love that Toby knows...I could go on but I need sleep. Wonderful wonderful job.
Date: March 21, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
SQQQUUEEEEEEE!
Oh that was just lovely! My heart flittered when he took the crayon and rolled it between his long, lean, sexy fingers. Dang it! That Pam is a lucky gal.
Okay, I'm droooling (yep...I meant that extra "o"). I gotta have more please. :)
Well done. Ok, I'm a liquid Snarkland Puddle right now, under my computer desk. Sigh.
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
That was really nicely done. Thanks for writting it...I'm hooked.
Date: March 21, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Awwww...Mox, how amazing was that? Periwinkle blue, huh? God, Jim is such a sweetie. Karen is making me a little nervous though, and what's up with Dwight? Hmmm. I have to do jury duty tomorrow and I'm pissed because I'll be wasting time sitting around when I could be reading and reviewing all this great fic. If only I could bring my laptop, sigh...
Date: March 21, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
“It was periwinkle,” she said, handing him the crayon.
He took it from her fingers and rolled it between his.
“Yes,” he finally said. “This is it. This is my favorite color.”
Oh my... That is so... I just... AW!!! I LOVE it! So unexpected, but so obvious that it was what Jim had been planning when he'd asked her! I love it! I can't wait to hear what she says to the chat room people!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
McPants is never going to buy that. A dude would never pick periwinkle.
As always, lovely work :)
Date: March 21, 2007 07:17 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
"Yes," he finally said. "This is it. This is my favorite color."
That line is awesome. I loved this chapter, and can't wait to see where it all goes!!
Date: March 21, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Periwinkle??? Too freaking perfect. Jim has the guts to bring up Casino Night. Nice. But he's too much of a guy to know what that color is called. Double Nice. And the way Crayolas smell? Heck, this could be the world's first Scratch n' Sniff Fan Fic.
And the whole meeting up with Toby to CYA over Psycho!Karen to head off the bunny boiling? Very clever. This story just keeps getting better & better.
You are making us all loopy with anticipation, Mox. Remember that there is no Office at ALL tomorrow & take mercy on us poor souls with another update soon!
Date: March 21, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
Well done. Well done! I loved the Casino Night dress/crayone part at the end. It's funny though because i too am working on a story and i was thinking of somehow incorporating that lovely periwinkle into my story too. This is a great plot - I hope you update soon!!!