Date: March 18, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
I kind of hope that this is how it really goes with their breakup because then I can hate Karen like I want to..."Call of Duty!"
Date: March 18, 2007 01:34 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
This continues to just amaze me. It's hard to keep the momentum going on longer stories (or at least, I find that it is), but honestly, this just gets better and better and better. Karen's threat? Whoa. I never considered it before, but you know, they've mentioned "love contracts" and reporting to Toby more than once....eeeeeee.
Loving this and can't wait for an update!
10 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
EVIL!Karen!!! Ahh! Hate her. But LOVE story!!
Date: March 18, 2007 09:15 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Karen has officially turned to the dark side. I guess this means Jim *won't* be making that visit to Pam's later in the day? Although I think they would be capable of keeping it quiet until Karen's gone...
Date: March 18, 2007 03:35 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
"Was there ever a time you were fucking me and NOT pretending it was her?"
Wow. KarenTheJimSlayer is back!
Date: March 18, 2007 02:57 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Ooooh. Wow. Finally a Karen/Jim breakup story where she's an actual b*tch. Not that she doesn't have a right to be hurt but wow, this is boarding single white femaileish b*tch. I love it.
I hope you're feeling better soon, Moxie. The stories can wait until all is well!
Date: March 18, 2007 01:32 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Hey Moxie, still loving this story, and I am once again on the edge of my seat and extremely excited about the next chapter. Once again looking forward to it as much if not more than the final harry potter.
I hate to do this, and hopefully it's taken as the friend who tells their friend there is something in their teeth, rather than someone who doesn't know one that well commenting on the fact that they've gained some weight... With that in mind, I will say that this was my least favorite of the chapters thus far and I'm admittedly a little disappointed. I know that this scene needed to happen and that Karen's role in all of this could not be taken lightly. But, she reacts so strongly that the emphasis of the story has almost completely shifted into a different story all together. It is an interesting twist but as a lover of what has happened in this story thus far I was not remotely ready for Karen to come to the forefront and become the giant menace that will now cloud the rest of what was a so much more interesting and subtle storyline between Jim and Pam. I believe that "subtle" is the key word, and this chapter is jerking, raw and passionate. It feels a little like you asked Michael Creighton's Disclosure to ghost write for Fitzgerald in the middle of For Whom the Bell Tolls and I am walking away shaken and confused. Not to say that raw and passionate are not important, it is just to say that given the stream of the story thus far (jim and pam were a moment ago falling newly and sweetly cyber in love and talking about miss congeniality), this very real confrontation was a little too soon. Nothing more, nothing less. Thanks for the story!
Date: March 17, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Sweet. Karen is effing crazy. Although, I must admit that I would feel a bit... slighted as well... don't think I would charge sexual harassment... then I am not crazy.
I looooove this story. And am terrified of your Karen. Yikes. If we were afraid for Jim of Roy... watch out Pam, Karen's armed and fabulously dangerous. Thanks so much for writing this story! It is fantastical.
Date: March 17, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
OMG, I did NOT see THAT coming. Wow. Interesting direction, one I haven't seen before, but one Karen could certainly pursue if bitter enough. Ouch.
There's a great reason to disclose your relationship to HR, that's for sure.
Awesome as always, Moxie. Hope you're on the mend!
Date: March 17, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Do I really need to sing the South Park song again? Seriously awesome! And I am mucho intrigued with what Karen will do. I hope that you feel better soon!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Oh, Karen. If she fell off a cliff it would be rather nice, actually. Broke a few bones, did something to her neck...
Unbelievable - but I guess it's to your credit if I can still believe Karen doing something like this even if she doesn't do things like this on the show [at least, not in front of everyone].
I am going to love seeing what you do with bitch!Karen in the office, though, and seeing Jim try to interact with someone he knows he's been IMing, but she doesn't - ooh, this is going to be delicious.
Date: March 17, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Psy-cho-path!
Thanks for the new chapter, Moxie! I am enjoying this story so much.
My mind is running around wondering how this will go - hurray! We all want you to post soon, but your health is more important, so take care of yourself first, and write second. (There may be other things between your health and writing, too - feel free to take care of those also.) We will be here when you're ready to give us more!
Loving, loving, loving this story.
Date: March 17, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Great chapter, Moxie. It made me so pissed at Karen, I could just spit. That evil temptress interloper! I'm starting to think she has multiple personalities...and I love how your Jim stands up to her, without sinking into the muck. Thanks for updating - total treat.
Date: March 17, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Whoa. This is intense. I'm so glad you're sticking with this story though, I can't wait to see how it ends.
Date: March 17, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Ooh, I think this is the best "Jim breaks up with Karen and boy is she pissed!" chapter I've ever read. Bringing up the sexual harassement card was pure (psycho) genius on her part...
Date: March 17, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok, I seriously GASPED when Karen played the sexual harrassment card. OMG!!!!! I can NOT wait for the next chapter. I hope this doesn't keep him from telling Pam how he feels...UGH!!!!
Date: March 17, 2007 04:02 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Oww. He just got told. xDD.
Date: March 17, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Holy shit. That was intense. I'm so glad that you wrote the no holds barred approach to the Jim/Karen break up because I know we won't see it on the show, and your take is just SO. GOOD.
The only problem? The new chapter is no longer new and now we have to wait again. :(
AWESOME job, as usual. ;)
Date: March 17, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
ooooh dammmnn. She's pissed. I like it! = )
Date: March 17, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Nice! I'm so glad this chapter was posted. I really needed a break from studying. I hope you are feeling better, Moxie. Mairzy Doats and Happy Jehovah's witness!
Date: March 17, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Oh my. She did NOT take that well, did she?
Well, it sounds like she wouldn't have taken it well no matter WHAT the situation was. Now there sounds like a foreshadowing of Karen meanness to come.
But I can't wait to see Pam and Jim together! :)
Hope you are feeling better.
Date: March 17, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Good job, Mox, on this inevitable confrontation. Can't wait to see what happens next. Jim will have to be careful until Karen's gone. Nice plot twist.
Date: March 17, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Love love love. And you left it like that?? How's Jim going to tell Pam about the whole internet thing??? I cannot wait for more. This story is just too good.
Date: March 17, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Karen is all kinds of crazy. I mean, damn. But, yay, he finally got that over with. Now she just has to go away forever so he can marry Pam and they can have lots of babies.
Date: March 17, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?
Maybe you pressured me into moving to Scranton, because you wanted a relationship, and since you were my new superior I didn't think I had a choice.”
Gasp! Shock! Ominous dun dun dunh! Moxie, you should know that every time I see you've updated Squirrel, I clap like Eddie Murphy in Nutty Professor. (Hercules, Hercules)