1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2019 05:35 pm Title: Out of the Fog
Very nice and very sexy. Cute ending, too!
1 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2019 07:05 am Title: The Impressionist
I like the mixture of au and real show in this. It's a depressingly lovely approach.
1 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2018 06:24 pm Title: Blue Valentine
I think Jim will be looking for many ways to make a mess if this is his reward. Very nice.
Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks!
Date: April 26, 2017 10:21 am Title: Out of the Fog
Wow! Very sexy. I loved it.
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2017 04:49 pm Title: Out of the Fog
I'm so glad you found us and posted this great story! I think you had just the right amount of story/plot, loved the dynamic you set up between Jim and his friends (something sorely lacking from the show). And then the sexy parts were 🔥🔥🔥, dang! I think you wrote Pam well, giving her some new found confidence (and having Jim help draw that confidence out of her as he always did) but also having her deal with that ever-present streak of self-doubt and shyness that she has.
Hope to read more from you soon!
Date: April 02, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Paper in pink
I thought this was really sweet. The gift really suits Jim at the time. I like how it was very sweet and thoughtful, but simple and not too overtly romantic, like he wanted to lay down a heavy hint, but not cross a line. It captures what his gestures were like then. Lovely idea.
10 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2017 11:43 am Title: Out of the Fog
I adored this! It's so right. Pam had to have a moment of doubt, how could she not. Yes, she made the decision to leave Roy herself but to jump into something with someone so soon (even if that someone is Jim) would require a moment of hesitation, just to look at the paths ahead.
Jim has had years to think and to settle on the idea of Pam and him together. On the other hand, for Pam, this is all new. She was in denial about what Jim truly meant to her.
Anyways, thanks for sharing.
Date: March 14, 2017 01:58 pm Title: Out of the Fog
Nicely structured, very passionate!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Im glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 14, 2017 01:30 pm Title: Paper in pink
I love how they fell in love over pranking Dwight. I think you caught the tone of his pre-Casino Night angst very nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you nqllisi! I appreciate your review. I'm glad I could do the character of Jim justice!
Date: March 14, 2017 01:26 pm Title: Blue Valentine
Nice "off camera" family moment. NanReg summed it up nicely, "Sweet and sexy."
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! Very happy you liked it. :)
Date: March 10, 2017 09:41 am Title: Paper in pink
He likes that he can be the one to make the pink come back into her face. That line broke my heart, msteapot. This little story of yours captures Jim's unrequited love and longing. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
One of the best compliments I've ever gotten! Thank you NanReg! I love knowing I made somebody actually feel something -- I appreciate your review :)
~ msteapot
Date: March 09, 2017 06:11 pm Title: Blue Valentine
Shutterbug, this was a pleasure to read. It painted a clear picture of a happy, messy, loving family. "Even as he formed the words, his mind flashed a different image: Pam pinned to the wall, his mouth slanted over hers, her skin stamped with color--a trail of where he'd touched her." Sweet and sexy. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! What lovely feedback! I really enjoy writing "moments," little snapshots of their lives, whether they're ordinary or extraordinary moments. It's a lot of fun. Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Date: March 08, 2017 10:54 pm Title: Paper in pink
Oh surprise ending! I thought this was really sweet, and could totally imagine it as a legit prank they could've pulled!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Writing the prank was difficult, I am DEFINITELY not as creative as Jim & Pam, haha!
Date: March 07, 2017 09:33 pm Title: Paper in pink
Again you have the characters spot on.. This reads like a beginning to a long story (Hint. Hint.) P[ease review my piece-PAM AND JIM ON VALENTInES
Author's Response:
Thank you Moogie Man! I wasn't planning on it being a multiple chapter story, but maybe!
~ msteapot
Date: March 07, 2017 08:23 pm Title: Pam and Jim on Valentine's Day!
This story works well because Jim has to realize he has become Roy. It seems the similarities between the two situations are not lost on the couple and they manage to work things out for the better. Nicely done!
Date: March 05, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Blue Valentine
Haha sweet story! I always love fics set in the present day, and this did not disappoint!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: February 27, 2017 07:14 pm Title: Million Miles Away
Very readable. You may not skim a cow, but you should read-a-bull! Seriously good job
Date: February 27, 2017 07:08 pm Title: The Impressionist
I like it!
Date: February 27, 2017 06:34 pm Title: Out of the Fog
This was just flat well-written. damn!! How am I going to win the Valentine challenge? Don't even get me started about Msteapot. That chick, like you can WRITE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and your kind words. I'm just doing my best here. And I totally ageee about msteapot, she has a way with words. Thanks again
Date: February 25, 2017 01:53 pm Title: Pam and Jim on Valentine's Day!
Great story! I thought it was very touching, and your writing style flowed very well! I hope Pam has learned her lesson and really appreciates Jim this time around.
Author's Response: Thanks, but we will see! She's a bit self-centered!
Date: February 23, 2017 07:29 pm Title: Pam and Jim on Valentine's Day!
Nice story, but man Jim really came off as a loser. Gets dumped and then crawls back on Valentine's Day to talk about his feelings!
Great job though looking forward to your other work.
Author's Response:
I agree. Jim has always wimped out when it comes to Pam. At least he set down some rules. Will Pam stick to them? Will Jim be a man if she doesn't? Stay tuned!
Date: February 23, 2017 07:06 pm Title: Pam and Jim on Valentine's Day!
This is great! I love that Pam and Jim can overcome their troubles and end up together. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
But have they? Is Pam a little too quick to agree to Jim's rules? She likes attention. Can Jim provide enough?
Date: February 22, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Out of the Fog
This was such a beautiful story. My heart leapt and fell and everything in between. I hope you continue writing other stories!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I wanted it to feel sort of up and down and high and low. I really appreciate your reading it. BTW I love your Voicemails fic. It's awesome
Date: February 22, 2017 08:53 pm Title: The Impressionist
I thought you captured Pam’s character so well, it was a beautiful written piece! I’m excited to see where you take the Pam/Jim romance, since Pam is marriage. Good luck :)
Date: February 17, 2017 10:28 am Title: Out of the Fog
I'm pretty new to this site too!
So glad I took the time to read this; I'm blushing haha! Dear lord that was some fabulous smut... It had just the right amount of detail!
I thoroughly enjoyed this and hope you write more in the future!
Author's Response: Thanks so much I was worried about the detailing but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Im working on two new ones now. Please keep reading!