1 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2019 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
My only objection to this fic is that I wish there were more of it. Lovely, lovely emotion.
Date: March 10, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute. I'm loving the ending!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! :)
Date: March 10, 2007 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
So good. I was really surprised at the end when you said this was your first. I certainly couldn't tell!
Love that Dwight got arrested because of the flyers.
Feel free to write more when the mood strikes!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I plan on writing more. I have an idea already! :)
Date: March 10, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd feel so much better if this is how it was actually going to play out.....nice job on your first fic. Sometimes, the really romantic ones lose the characters, but this one made me feel the LOVE and made me know it was Pam and Jim in there....Yeay!
Author's Response: Hey thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. See ya over on TWoP!
Date: March 10, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet and smooshy and satisfying to my JAM-shipper heart. Congrats on your first!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: March 10, 2007 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah! So glad you posted it!
Date: March 10, 2007 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story.
I loved how simply it all happened. There was no angst, just exactly what I would want to happen. I hope Greg Daniels reads this one.
Author's Response: Ha! I can just imagine GD at his computer late at night devouring fanfic. That would be excellent... thanks for the feedback! :-)
Date: March 10, 2007 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
That was cute... and I really wish something like this would happen, but alas, that's why we have fanfic!
Author's Response: Yes, me too... thanks for the feedback!
Date: March 10, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, please tell me this is how the infamous elevator scene really plays out! That would be extra awesome!
Author's Response: Nah, unfortunately I don't think it is. But it played out this way in my brain. :-)
Date: March 10, 2007 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Very, very sweet. Great job Skedundie! (and also, fun name!)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You know it took me longer to think of a name than it took to write the story. ;-)
Date: March 10, 2007 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
aww, simple and sweet.i liked how she knew it was him without looking :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: March 10, 2007 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah. I think when it finally does happen, it will (should) be a simple, quiet moment like this, not a huge melodrama. Some great small details - that he can't remember what happened with Karen just the previous night, that he feels awful and wonderful, the way she almost reads his mind. This is just very poignant and lovely and true.
Author's Response: Hey Colette, thanks a lot for the feedback. Are you the same colette over on TWoP? :-)
Date: March 10, 2007 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwww! I don't usually like the mushy ones unless they're short and sweet and simple. And this was! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: March 10, 2007 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. Really sweet and quiet and well written.
Just a suggestion: If you direct link to your story, you should put spoiler warnings in your chapter notes, too. I'm not traumatized, because I was mildly spoiled about that, but it might bother some other people. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback!... I'll go take care of that right now. :)