Date: March 11, 2007 03:02 pm Title: Five Steps
I just want to reiterate how much I love this. Because I really really do. YAY.
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Five Steps
oooh.. i LIKE. i thought it would be all depressing, but nice twist at the end!
Date: March 11, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Five Steps
Wow --- that ending. Holy crap, I didn't expect that. I love how Pam says that again, too -- "I'm fine with my choices." Very interesting... great story! I love S2 stories.
Date: March 11, 2007 11:58 am Title: Five Steps
Oh,*so* good. Great concept, great execution!
Date: March 11, 2007 10:39 am Title: Five Steps
Geez, the second terrific story from you in like a week! The structure of this is so clever and there are so many 'right' moments - love the idea of Jim retrieving her discarded drawings from the trash, that a simple look from him speaks volumes to her - good or bad...and the ending is ridiculously hot. (Great las line too.) Going to read it again right now!
Date: March 11, 2007 08:46 am Title: Five Steps
Ooh, love how you bring "I'm fine with my choices" back around -- niiiiiice! And the five steps theme is really clever.