Date: March 28, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Great job!
Date: March 26, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Oh poor Jan! So heartbreaking. I love the Jan and Michael coupling and am so glad they are finally well and truly together.
Date: March 25, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Your Jan voice is good, really fleshed out. You've really picked up on important and subtle moments and aspects of moments that would be important and devastating to Jan. I'd love to read more...
9 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2007 12:05 am Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
I can't believe this only has 5 reviews! What! You did a really good job with this. Excellent Jan POV and some great back stories. Favourite Lines: (She did wake up that way, though.) And: All of a sudden Jan was a third wheel on her own date.
Very well done!
9 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 10:57 am Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Awww, Jan! She was there for him. She’d packed a bag.
Excellent, concise, tight sentence. I really like your prose, and your portrait of Jan.
Date: March 22, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
You just capture Jan so well! I loved this. She tries to get over Michael, but he is what she want, for better or for worse.
Author's Response: Thanks! I find Jan to be so completely fascinating, especially her strange, yet irresistable attraction to Michael.
Date: March 20, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Yay, Kel, I LOVE it!! It turned out really nicely. (BTW: I noticed one extra word in the last part in the sentence about her heart hurting.)
And seriously? You flatter me. I really appreciated getting to read your stuff and Michael/Jan is just so great. I've been crushing on them a lot and especially since "Cocktails." So nice to see a S2 perspective on Jan's feelings for Michael. Hee.
Author's Response: Of COURSE I left an extra word in there. Thanks for catching that. :) And thank you AGAIN for beta-ing, because seriously, it helped so much. (And I know you're crazy busy right now, too.)
Date: March 20, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
And a long summer it was! Great job, I love Jan and now I love you for writing this!
Author's Response: Unbearably long! Thanks for the love. :)
Date: March 20, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Five Self-Destructive Moments
Good job. This seems very Jan.
Author's Response: Thanks.:)