7 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2009 06:29 pm Title: Keep me
I just stumbled across this awesome story tonight and was really enjoing it until I got to the end of Chapter 5 and there was no "Next". Please don't leave me hanging - won't you please update it so we can get to the smushy good parts? The one's you hinted about in your author notes? Pleeeease?
Date: March 10, 2008 10:26 pm Title: Keep me
I just got into this story and I love the plot and the whole idea! This chapter is especially cute and I can't wait until you update...soon?? : )
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 06:14 am Title: Keep me
This was great!! Can't wait for an update!! :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Keep me
So happy to see another chapter of this one!
9 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Keep me
So happy to see another chapter of this one!
9 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Find me
I've followed this story from the beginning although I only now registered at MTT. I really love this more and more after every new chapter. It's believable, not too rushed, everything moves nicely and there's that JAM-vibe that sometimes is lost on AU-fics. I cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
It really means a lot to me that you're taking the time to review my little fic!! Honestly, it's a little intimidating in here with all the AMAZING writers that post their stories.
Welcome to MTT!! (officially)
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 24, 2007 11:38 am Title: Keep me
Thank you for updating this!!! I missed this story :) I like how Jim and Pam are progressing.
Author's Response:
You missed my story?? Oh, that's so sweet!!! I'm so flattered.
Thanks so much for reading. Hopefully I won't keep you waiting long for the next part.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 24, 2007 07:48 am Title: Keep me
This was my favoritest chapter yet. I love that Pam clues Jim in on Dwight and Angela. The concept for this story is extremely clever.
Please don't make us wait too long for the happy ending.
It's going to be happy...right? :)
Author's Response:
I HAD to put in Dwight and Angela. That's just too good not to. I like to think that Pam might have...walked in on them being...intimate. Kinda like Ryan did. Because Dwight and Angela have this weird way of being intimate with each other without...you know. Okay, I'm not making sense. Sorry.
Of course it's going to be a happy ending. But I'm going to have to talk to you about the direction that this is going to take for the next chapter. Seriously, I don't know what I'd do without you.
I hope you had a good vacation!!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 24, 2007 06:28 am Title: Keep me
Aww! this is sooo sweet! It's a really special fic - keep going! And update soon!
Author's Response:
OMG! Thanks so much. It really means a lot to me that you're reading.
cheers.
--Lex
9 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Keep me
Great story but I think Jim would make a move a little faster... ;) but it wouldn't be much of a story!
Author's Response:
I'm actually debating that very issue. Jim would move pretty fast, considering Pam's not engaged or dating or anything like that. But on the other hand, maybe he wouldn't...and you're right, the story would be over pretty quick.
Thanks for reading!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 23, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Keep me
Oh, very nice! I like how well they get along. (Jim, kiss her!) (Sorry, all in good time, I'm sure.)
Author's Response:
Actually, I'm kind of proud of the fact that Pam kissed him first.
^_^
Thanks so much for reading!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 23, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Keep me
interesting approach to an interesting story. keep them coming. the chapters, i mean, not the characters. that's obscene, the characters, i mean. well, um, yeah, good chapter.
Author's Response:
*laughs*
Don't worry, I get your meaning. ;)
I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. I'm currently working on the next chapter, and then I'm going to have to wait for my beta to get back from vacation so I can ask her about all the nagging doubts I have about the direction for this fic.
Thanks so much for taking the time to write a review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 23, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Keep me
I love how you're keeping your AU close to the canon we all know.
About your comment: Things are looking to be moving in the "Jim-loves-Pam-but-will-only-angst-about-it-for-a-while" direction.
I hope that's only a little while! :)
Update soon, please!
Author's Response:
Yes, I love the idea of writing a canon!A/U story. But then, does that make me predictable? Hmm...
Anyway, I won't pump up the angst too much, so don't worry. Jim strikes me as the kind of guy who is more than willing to explore the possibility of something more, but he might be willing to follow her lead on this...we'll see. ;)
Anyway, thanks for taking the time to review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 12, 2007 10:03 am Title: Call me
Hiya Quincha... how would you afford to get to Mexico if you have no money :P.
DUDE! The office would be so much better if Jim was naked (okay, shirtless)... the rest of them... not so much. But a shirtless Jim - ratings would SKYROCKET
I loved all the little talks from episodes.
Pranks!!! Loved that convo!
Its a great chapter :)
Author's Response: I live in LA. Mexico's really not that far. Plus, I'm got....connections.
*grins*
And OMG Naked!Jim is great, but would not in any way make up for Naked!Michael, Naked!Kevin, or Naked!Stanley. Just...NO. (although, have you ever seen Creed in a muscle shirt? DAMN. I was totally blown away....that's what she said.)
I totally think that Pam is the real prank mastermind. She's the ideaman and Jim's the one who actually makes things happen. Like Danny Ocean and Rusty.
Thanks for reading!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 10, 2007 09:13 am Title: Call me
I love this chapter. It doesn't just show the passage of time. It shows major compatibility. And that they should get together... soonish.
Seriously, these little conversations are amazing!
Author's Response:
*laughs* Yes, okay, but I just didn't want to make it seem like 1. they meet, 2. they fall in love, 3. happily ever after. I want to seem like they're taking their time and becoming friends first....and the romance kind of takes care of itself from there.
Thanks so much for reading.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 09, 2007 09:28 pm Title: See me
Hey! I just wanted to say that I really like your dialogue. The voices of Jim and Pam are well-done and you've got some nice banter going on. Nice work!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks!! I can't tell you how much I actually agonize over the dialogue. It really means a lot to me that you think it sounds just like them.
Thanks for the review and happy reading!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 09, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Call me
Aww. It's really sweet. I usually never read A/U stuff, but I thought I'd give this a shot. And I like it! So please update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad that I was able to lure you into the wonderful world of A/U. Hee. It really is fun to come up with some of that stuff. I find that many A/U stories are a lot of fun.
Thanks for reviewing!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 09, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Find me
I don't think it's work so much as a common sense of humor and to be honest I see that is the tie that binds almost every relationship I know together. More soon please :)
Author's Response:
I do think that they have a common sense of humor, though often times I think Pam's might tend to be a lot darker than Jim's.
Anyway, thanks so much for reading! It really does mean a lot to me.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 01, 2007 09:30 pm Title: See me
Oh, that's so sweet! I'm glad Jim is taking that next step to not just run into Pam accidentally!
Have you asked over at TWoP in the fanfic thread for a beta? Otherwise, a number of people are marked here at MTT as "willing to beta". I'm not one of them, as I wouldn't want anyone to have to wait for my response, in case it's way slow!
Anyway, I continue to enjoy this story!
Author's Response:
I'm in the process of getting a beta, actually.
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 12:25 pm Title: See me
Aw, this is cute (and even cuter with the inclusion of Sasha!) I really like seeing them get to know each other under these different circumstances, where progression of their relationship will (probably) be smoother and easier.
Author's Response:
I really liked the idea of Jim and Pam still having their dynamic even in different circumstances. And Sasha is so cute!!
Thanks for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
6 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2007 11:26 am Title: Find me
i'm liking this story, but i think you could probably use a beta ... you've got a few mistakes in here that sort of hinder the flow of the fanfic ... 'flurecent', 'your' instead of 'you', that kind of thing. nothing a little spellcheck and a helpful beta-friend couldn't fix :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm in the process of getting a beta. You're right about all those little typos that you tend to miss.
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 10:06 am Title: See me
I really dig this story. It's fresh and fluffy. It's nice to see Jim and Pam just enjoying each other's company, you know? I love angst as much as the next JAM junkie, but this is like a breath of fresh air.
Author's Response:
yeah, I love the angst too, but I love the fluff a lot more. I like the dynamic between these two sans the drama.
thanks for reviewing!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 09:11 am Title: See me
Aww this story is super cute! I love the concept behind it all and that even without sitting next to each other day after day in the office, they could still have that easy back and forth banter
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 07:28 am Title: See me
I love AUs and their rapport is amazing :) Jim is so so so hot, we were watching old office episdodes last night with an office virgin and even she fell for him by episode 2. Sigh.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's easy to fall for Jim. *sigh*
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 31, 2007 06:01 am Title: See me
I am loving this story!
I would offer to be a beta, but um, I think I also mistype everything and am way to detail oriented, so, I use a beta also. if you go to members, you can search by betas, and then email some. thats how i found mine. it is a bit odd to just be like, random out of the blue, you wanna beta, but they are all nice, and so, it works :). but keep writing, because i really am enjoying this
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!
Yes, I'm in the process of getting a beta reader. It's funny, because I like to dive in and really pick apart other people's stories (I've been a beta reader for many people), but I just can't seem to do it for my own. How sad is that?
Anyway, let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
cheers.
--Lex