Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:04 am Title: Saving Lives

Um yes they are! I am engaged to one! I live in Austin! I dont go to UT...private school, but I am a longhorn for life!! hook em! anywaaaays, I love Jackson...I love him love him, except in my mind he doesn't look like an indy rocker...he looks like Matthew Mcconaghey with dark hair...haha

and you are right, Jim doesnt deserve her right now, he is being such a douche! 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

I really like Karen with Jackson.  They're good together, with all the verbal sparring and such.  Go for him, Karen!

And I love this from Dwight:  "Fact. Jim left the office in a hurry and Pam followed him with a can of grape soda which is universally known as their peace offering.”

Fabulous. 

Reviewer: fauvistfly Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

i really like jackson! you should post a photo of him. :) i like the plot development here--and that potentially everyone will be happy in the end, even karen. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 02:30 pm Title: World's Worst Car Ride....Ever

Loving Jealous! Jim and Jackson's not so bad, himself! Really enjoying Jim's thoughts about the scene unfolding in his car... and how he's watching everyone's emotions unfold.

Reviewer: MrsKamorri Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 01:50 pm Title: It Would Be Easier to Move On if I Didn't Love You So Much

Wow! Who knew I'd love Jealous!Jim sooo much?? Mostly I just think it's good for him. I love Jim as much as the next red-blooded American housewife (so much in fact, that my best FRIEND had a dream I was kissing Jim) but I do hate it when he's mean to Pam. Somehow jealous of Jackson is way easier to take than jealous of Roy. Or maybe it's Pam with Jackson that's easier to take. Either way, I'm lovin' it!!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

Interesting that Jackson looked at Karen a bit disapprovingly for flirting, but then was so friendly.  I loved the garlic line. 


Author's Response: i think. for now. that he just feels bad for her....we will see now won't we. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:23 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

so precious. i think you're going in the right direction with this. pam and jim, jackson and karen. i can give jackson up to her. i'm not quite so invested in his love life :) 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

Still good. Jackson's still dreamy. Karen's sympathetic (even if she is a mob princess.) Better yet, Pam's head is on Jim's shoulder, where it belongs - nice call back to one of the all time great Office images (I fully embrace my inner sap, thank you very much.) 

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 09:25 pm Title: It Would Be Easier to Move On if I Didn't Love You So Much

Man. As much as I've loved your other fics, I have been jonesing for a little Jackson lately.

It is so in character for Pam to be most upset by the favorite movies, and for Jim to notice -and be bothered by the significance of- the song on her phone. That he feels a little bad playing up his weekend with Karen (but glad that he got a reaction) but that he is physically sickened by her convo with Jackson (when she's doing the same thing) I thought was awesome too. And the fact that Pam recognized his reaction and went to the roof to (sorta) comfort and reassure him... *love*

More, please. Now that Fool's Bargain and Hey Jealousy are finished, this fic has hopped to the top of my "stalking eagerly awaiting updates" list, along with Squirrel. 

Reviewer: JinRain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 08:08 pm Title: World's Worst Car Ride....Ever

Jim who?! Jackson is AWESOME!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 06:27 pm Title: It Would Be Easier to Move On if I Didn't Love You So Much

Aw, I love it.  So telling that they can get to each other like that, but they're always drawn back together.  As much as I like Jackson, he's not who Pam's meant to be with.  Great job with this.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 05:58 pm Title: It Would Be Easier to Move On if I Didn't Love You So Much

aw! that was cute...the end of this chapter, that is.