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Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:45 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

Hee. "All You Need Is Love" -- well maybe trust would be nice too.  :D

Great chapter, as always. Can't wait to see how blindsided Jim is when Karen suddenly isn't so sure about him. Nothing is guaranteed.

Go Pam, laying it all out there. And Jim, god bless him, trying to convince himself that he can decide to love Karen because she's the safer, more secure choice.

I want more Jackson like whoa,  but I REALLY want to see the fallout of this chapter from Jim's perspective. Regardless, I can't wait to see where you take us next!

Reviewer: maryuc Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:35 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

all you need is love?  if im right scratch the date with jackson - i want jim!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:27 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

All you need is love.  And Jim needs a good smack.  Bring on Jackson...

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:27 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

Again, nice chapter.
As for a guess with the title? "All you need is love."?
Maybe. whatever. good story.

Reviewer: Ozana Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Not Ready to Forgive

Hey Hey Hey!  I am from Oklahoma!  Watch it!!

Love this, but it is way too short.  My god, I want to smack Jim and Pam sideways.  And the Beatles are never wrong. All you need is Love !

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:16 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

WellI believe they were right to say All you need is Love.  Where's my date?!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:15 pm Title: What if the Beatles Were Wrong?

All you need is love??

 

Seriously Jim needs to get over it and realize that Casino Night wasn't about her not loving him or loving Roy more than him it was about her having to end a 10 year relationship in a second and being unsure.  She's sure now and she's grown and they just neeeeeeeeeeeeeed to be together.  

 

Ok...sorry bout that

 

Love the story :o) 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:32 am Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

People from Oklahoma ARE foreigners and they are not welcome here.

Hey hey joke: how come Texas doesn't float off into the Gulf? Because Oklahoma sucks so bad!! ahahaha 

you have to be from around here to know this stuff...come on fess up

ok so Jim and Pam are on the roof...then what?? I'm excited for more, can you tell?? 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:22 am Title: I Don't Want to Be the Third Jackass

Jackson went down a few notches for drinking fancy beer...but oh well, it is Pam's place right? hehe

 So they arent together? well gee...this is going to be interesting isnt it??

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:15 am Title: World's Worst Car Ride....Ever

So I guess I actually am going to review each chapter, a full inbox is nice right? This chapter kept making my stomach knot up...to reiterate...hateful bitch, douche, hook em, love it

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:04 am Title: Saving Lives

Um yes they are! I am engaged to one! I live in Austin! I dont go to UT...private school, but I am a longhorn for life!! hook em! anywaaaays, I love Jackson...I love him love him, except in my mind he doesn't look like an indy rocker...he looks like Matthew Mcconaghey with dark hair...haha

and you are right, Jim doesnt deserve her right now, he is being such a douche! 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Not Ready to Forgive

Karen is a hateful, selfish, bitch...there. I said it.

I feel better

reading on... 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

I really like Karen with Jackson.  They're good together, with all the verbal sparring and such.  Go for him, Karen!

And I love this from Dwight:  "Fact. Jim left the office in a hurry and Pam followed him with a can of grape soda which is universally known as their peace offering.”

Fabulous. 

Reviewer: amy_hates_greenbeans Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 06:08 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

love love love it!! please keep going!! :)

Reviewer: fauvistfly Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

i really like jackson! you should post a photo of him. :) i like the plot development here--and that potentially everyone will be happy in the end, even karen. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 02:44 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

So excited to find out what's happening on the roof! Enjoying this! And loving your creation, Jackson!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 02:30 pm Title: World's Worst Car Ride....Ever

Loving Jealous! Jim and Jackson's not so bad, himself! Really enjoying Jim's thoughts about the scene unfolding in his car... and how he's watching everyone's emotions unfold.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 02:23 pm Title: The Arrangement

Just catching up with this piece now, and am so excited by the direction it is taking (lunch with Jim, Karen, Pam and Jackson!?). Totally excited there are so many chapters for me to read!

Reviewer: MrsKamorri Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 01:50 pm Title: It Would Be Easier to Move On if I Didn't Love You So Much

Wow! Who knew I'd love Jealous!Jim sooo much?? Mostly I just think it's good for him. I love Jim as much as the next red-blooded American housewife (so much in fact, that my best FRIEND had a dream I was kissing Jim) but I do hate it when he's mean to Pam. Somehow jealous of Jackson is way easier to take than jealous of Roy. Or maybe it's Pam with Jackson that's easier to take. Either way, I'm lovin' it!!

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Not Ready to Forgive

I really hate it when Karen is vilified (sp?) in fics, so I love the image of her handing Pam a tissue. Great start.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

Interesting that Jackson looked at Karen a bit disapprovingly for flirting, but then was so friendly.  I loved the garlic line. 


Author's Response: i think. for now. that he just feels bad for her....we will see now won't we. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:31 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

“We’re in the mob.”

OMG!! perfect plot point!!!! Jim's gonna get whacked. I love it. Hee.

Thanks so much for this!

cheers.

--Lex

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:23 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

so precious. i think you're going in the right direction with this. pam and jim, jackson and karen. i can give jackson up to her. i'm not quite so invested in his love life :) 

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:20 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

Hee.  I like Karen here.  Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Do I Smell Like Garlic?

Still good. Jackson's still dreamy. Karen's sympathetic (even if she is a mob princess.) Better yet, Pam's head is on Jim's shoulder, where it belongs - nice call back to one of the all time great Office images (I fully embrace my inner sap, thank you very much.) 

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