Date: March 26, 2007 07:05 am Title: the deep end...
I really like it....I definitely would check back for new chapters, it's a fun plot with a believable device for finding out what Pam is thinking....
Author's Response: Actually one of my major concerns was not making it seem out of character for Pam to be writing these, so thanks for the reassurance. Also, I have decided to keep going so I hope you continue to like it. I really appreciate your input!
Date: March 26, 2007 12:35 am Title: the deep end...
What a great idea! I'd really love to see where this goes! Please continue it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And now that I've started planning the rest of the story in more detail, I'm excited about where it's going too!
Date: March 25, 2007 09:26 pm Title: the deep end...
continue!!! this is really good plot - keep it going!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm already writing the next few letters so check back!
Date: March 25, 2007 01:38 pm Title: the deep end...
You've got a lovely little set-up here, and I would really enjoy reading if you continued. That's just my two cents.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. And your two cents along with everyone else's has added up to enough money for me to keep going, so check back soon!
Date: March 25, 2007 01:19 pm Title: the deep end...
I really like this story. I think you should definitly continue because this ending just doesn't really seem like an ending. I would love to see how you would continue this!!
Author's Response: Yes. I agree the ending is problematic. I'm going to keep going with my original plan for more chapters, but I think if I had really wanted to make it a one-shot I would have ended it better, so maybe my subconscious was trying to tell me something.
Date: March 25, 2007 01:17 pm Title: the deep end...
Keep going. I really like this idea. Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm definitely going to keep going with it, so I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint.
8 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2007 01:03 pm Title: the deep end...
This is me...begging for more chapters:)
Author's Response: Apparently I'm a sucker for beggars so check back soon! ;)
Date: March 25, 2007 12:12 pm Title: the deep end...
Well, I'd like more! Besides, if you don't get it out of your head and onto ... well, not-paper, it'll just haunt you forever!
I like Marsha, too. You've made a really nice character here. And, yeah, sure, she's definitely gonna throw out those romantic letters. And not look for any more. And not try to ever get these two crazy kids together. Because self-control is a big part of human nature.
Loved the title and the little blurb on the "most recent" page. They would have drawn me right in, except your name is enough to do that, since I will read all your stuff. (But not in a stalker way, more in a "there's the other Kev, I like his/her stuff" sort of way.) Slinking away now.
Author's Response:
Aw! No slinking necessary. I wasn't at all creeped out. I just think that's very sweet. And it's "her stuff" by the way.
As for the story I'm so glad you like Marsha! I was worried that since she's entirely fictional no one would want to read about her. And you're right, I decided a couple of days ago to keep going with this, and since then the rest of the plot has definitely been begging to be told. But I'm still in the middle of my other story, so I'm not going to give any concrete promises for updates just yet.
Date: March 25, 2007 11:21 am Title: the deep end...
Please continue! I'm very intrigued, and wonder what Jim will say if he finds out about the letters and reads them. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm going to keep writing this, so I won't spoil anything major, but I can promise that at some point you will see Jim's reaction! ;)
Date: March 25, 2007 11:20 am Title: the deep end...
Yes, definately continue. *Please*
Author's Response: I love your name! And since you asked so nicely, I've decided to write more. Stay tuned.
Date: March 25, 2007 11:04 am Title: the deep end...
I like this concept quite a lot. I'd love to see you continue it. In canon, we never get the chance to really know what's going on in their minds. This letter idea is an original way for we the audience to know what Pam is thinking.
Plus, I'd love for Marsha to start looking through Jim's trash... :)
Looking forward to more, should you decide to continue...
Author's Response: I'm embarrassed to admit this, but this idea came to me because I have actually written letters like this. Multiple times. Although, I'm usually too paranoid to write them down, so I just write them as emails and then delete them. Anyways, about the story... I've gotten some interest so I think I'll keep going with it. No word on Jim's trash as yet, but we shall see...
Date: March 25, 2007 10:59 am Title: the deep end...
I love it! Keep it going! :-)
Author's Response: Okay! I will! Thanks.
Date: March 25, 2007 10:57 am Title: the deep end...
I like the start here, and you could leave it as is, but I would love to see what you have planned for what comes next. I say, go for it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the input. I think I will go for it.
Date: March 25, 2007 10:54 am Title: the deep end...
pleeeease keep going!
Author's Response:
Well, how can I possibly refuse a pleeeease? So you'll see more soon. But I can't say exactly when since I've suddenly found myself writing two stories at once. Strange how that happens.
Date: March 25, 2007 10:51 am Title: the deep end...
Wow I really like this idea. Please continue! I think the ending is not a good enough ending for a one-shot ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah I wasn't sure about the ending myself. I probably should've reworked it once I started thinking about a one-shot.