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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2020 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is wildly creative. I love it.

Reviewer: Jam01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Kinda weird for me to read as this is sorta happening to me. I fell for this guy named Eric where I work and I think he feels the same (Think Pam & Jim flirting in season one and two. That's pretty much us I swear) But he's moving away to college and he wont really say anything about us or what could happen... Really sucks, but I love the story and the show is the greatest...

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hate you? I love you and your wonderful stories!!  Every time I read a new one from you I think that it is my #1 favorite, until I read the next new one, and it becomes my #1 favorite. Which is exactly what happened here. This was such an awesome story, so well thought out, such a perfect mirroring of the show.  I loved Myra and Adam and truly hung on to every word. It's going right into my favorites!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh this was such a cool concept! Very original. Nice to think that this could really be possible, that this show and fandom could be having an effect on real people and real relationships.

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think this was wonderful.  Truly, you have done very well with this and I was really sucked in the whole time.  Bravo!

Reviewer: OpalArk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it...and actually assumed it was completely true and autobiographical for a good chunk of it...so it must be believable.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very clever!  Super, super concept, brilliant even.  And I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  It worked fine as you wrote it, but it might have worked on an even larger scale with a little bit more detail and a little slower pacing.  I know that when I have an idea I like I sometimes want to finish it so bad that I tend to rush it a bit, and I can imagine with an idea this good you might have felt that a little.  Still, one of the neatest stories I've read.      

   



Author's Response: oh i so wanted to make this multiple chapters but i already have two multi chapter fics going and didn't want to start a third. I'm so glad you liked it! I was thinking about my ex today and we broke up for really really stupid reasons and I related it JAM and I was like hmmmm......

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good times...I feel like you had fun writing that :)

Reviewer: gwgal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's a really sweet story.  It makes me feel better that I'm not alone thinking about relationships in terms of Pam and Jim!  Also, nice law school references.  This is probably the only place where I could read a reference to PR without shuddering! : )

Reviewer: crtnya Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can totally relate to this...You've done a great job making it seem real, even if none of it is...and isn't that what fiction is all about? 

And if there ARE parts you've picked from reality, as I always tend to do when I write...oh man...

 ;-)

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think you made me cry......

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it.  It's perfect.  Except I hope you're wrong about the two weeks before the series finale thing.  I really hope you're wrong about that.

I think it's really interesting (and believable) that they both stop watching The Office for a while.

So, no hate here.  And you know, like Martin Luther King said "Can't we all just get along?" (/Michael) 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

haha, no i like it. it is really cool. its like, okay, so my vocabulary sucks, but i like it. and you mention facebook. hum, me and my best friend exchange office quotes all over the place... maybe... oh wait, my best friend is a female also and we are both totally straight. so, probably not.

but, yeah, this was really cool. 

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