This fic made me so excited. It was angry and passionate and just plain good. I was trying to cut pizza and drink tea when I read the last bit, so for a brief second I thought they were on an overpass and Pam was gonna jump. I re-read it and now I get it. heh.

I love the anger!

All right!  Potty-mouthed Jim and Pam. I love it.

I don't actually think Jim would be this angry at Pam, or maybe not at all.  But... we'll see.  

I love Pam getting out of the car, and basically being ridiculous, because people are ridiculous like this. 

Where should you go with this?  Well, get to a happy place.  Happy thoughts.  It doesn't have to be immediately, but within a couple of chapters, please!  Otherwise, you'll be doing that mean stuff you talked about up above!  And yes, some of these stories are hitting me repeatedly in the grief bone.  Oh, and no one is allowed to die.  Except Princess Diana and Kelly's sister, who sadly already did.  Even Karen is not allowed to die, because then Jim might mourn her, or feel guilty 'cause he doesn't actually give a crap, etc.

Hey, watch Kev ramble...! 

"When he replays this conversation in his mind later, this will break his heart."

I like that line.  It shows he still has a bit of a soul left.  I seriously love and hate Jim like this.  I don't know where to tell you to take this, but I say bring on some more angst, but make Jim pay.  Make him pay for treating her like this because he has no right.

Man, that really truly broke my heart. Jim is such an ass, but a very well-written ass, and for that I give you major props. It takes a skilled writer to make me hate him :) Good work, can't wait for more!

ANGST!!! GGRRRAAAHHH!!!! i adore all your stories

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i really like this.  it's heartbreaking and oh so sad-  the fight clears the air.  their last exchange opens up the possibility for Rueful!Jim to replace Prick!Jim, but how you do it so it doesn't sound like every other piece of fanfic, i don't know.  i want jim to keep his edge and to keep beating pam down because he thinks he has that right, but i want her to fight back.  give fancy new beesley a real reason to bring it.  like have her continue to sit on the bench, but jim the prick refuses to get out of the car to comfort her, but he won't leave her there, either.  she has to stop crying.  no more crying!  i don't know, that's all i got.  like i said, i really like this and it's very satisfying to hate jim right now!  i hope you find your muse and continue this story.

Wow!  Please keep going with this, although, and I never thought I'd say this, part of me really hates Jim for how he is acting and being such a jerk - Pam's favorite flowers and saying he hates her...I'm not too fond of Jim myself right now.  Great start to a story.

Oh I want more good job, my brain is too broken for ideas

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“You can’t run from him forever.” Great line!

When he replays this conversation in his mind later, this will break his heart.

And that line just killed me.  Very nice!