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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2022 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1

This one was fun - and Pam's shamed admission about loving the animal crackers scene from Armageddon seems alarmingly in character.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

The ending to this story had me rolling.  This was really cute and good.  I can't believe that Dwight ended up coming to work in the midst of a zombie attack!  Awesome.  

Author's Response: thanks!  dwight would be that guy to show up in the middle of some disaster...he's prepared for all eventualitys.

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know how you managed to make a pennsylvania zombie attck, even remotely believable, but you did. good work! you aslo somehow managed to fit in the office characters and they're personalities, i laughed out loud.



Author's Response: thanks!  i wanted it to seem somewhat...normal.  that's not the right word.  but thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Fluffy and funny and sexy.. oh my! Great characterization of Dwight at the end! Thanks!



Author's Response: thank you!  sexy?  yea!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very funny.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2006 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL that was so cute and a tad bit terrifying. And I'm so glad I'm not the only one who IMDB's stuff like, all the time. lol.

Author's Response: i LIVe on IMDB.  seriously.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mixedberries Anonymous 5 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hah! I love that Dwight is so calm about everything. Totally like him.

Author's Response: dwight is the kind of guy you want on your side. actually....no, not at all. thanks for your review!

Reviewer: DementedRiku Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2006 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Brilliant! So much fun to read. And I liked how you slipped in Dawn of the Dead, which Jenna's husband wrote! You rock!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHA! Perfect!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Shut up, that can't be the end! More zombies! More sex! Come on!

Author's Response: if i could write a sex scene without having it sound...well, stupid. i would. i'm contemplating a follow up though...maybe throwing in some zombie office workers the day after kind of thing.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hee! Too much fun. And obviously, Dwight rocks.

Author's Response: Dwight does, indeed, rock. thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heeee! And, Whoa!

Dwight fighting off the zombie army but showing up bright and early was my favorite bit. Oh, and Jim wanting to recreate "Fame" (He's gonna live for-evah!!)

Author's Response: with those long gangly limbs of his, Jim is clearly cut out to be a dancer. Don't know why he's wasting his life at Dunder-Mifflin when he could be learning to fly high (high!) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Um. You're way too cool. I love how Dwight is totally unfazed by the situation. Bravo, you. So few can make this work, and yet you do it with style. Or something of the sort. Anyway, you're the best kid ever. There was barely a moment where I thought it couldn't happen.

Rooney applauds you. They told me. They're waving the flag for you.

Author's Response: Rooney used to babysit me. Actually, Robbie's coming over for tea tomorrow.

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm not big on zombies, but this was freakin' awesome. Favorite line: "I really don't want you to become an evil flesh eating reanimated corpse." I laughed so hard!


Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've never read or seen a movie about zombies but I truly enjoyed this story. And this line is the funniest thing I have ever read - "Pam, calm down. It's probably just a janitor or someone coming to HOLY FUCKING SHIT WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?" That cracked me up!!


Author's Response: thanks. the mental image of jim's reaction when faced with zombie darryl was too good for me to pass up.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Funny, scary and quite creative! Despite all the Jam goodness and zombie-scares, this is my favorite line:

"Jim is asking Pam every question he ever wanted to ask her, every stupid little inquiry and fact that he ever wanted to know."

Author's Response: thank you! i sort of pinned jim as the type of guy that would store up questions and observations about the girl that he loves, little things that he would never really ask her. but if a zombie attack isnt a good reason to ask those questions, then i dont know what is.

Reviewer: Waylaid Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Greatest. Fic. Ever.

Great job, seriously. Dwight at the end was just sublime. Great job!

Author's Response: oh, thank you. dwight is relaly fun to write...and any time you can work in the words "dwight" and "bow staff"..well, that's just too good to pass up.

Reviewer: swestworld Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay this? Is hilarious.

Author's Response: thanks! i probably had just a little too much fun writing it.

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahahahahaha! Fabulous. I love this challenge already.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: princesslisa Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha! I love it. Thanks for being first to respond to the challenge!

Author's Response: thanks for coming up with it! it was way too fun to write.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG you rock. LOVED IT.

Author's Response: aha, thank you so much!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2006 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome zombie movie humor! Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks!

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