Date: March 06, 2008 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. I think this is the first time I've read a story in which Pam was so amazingly confident and happy. Good job.
Date: April 06, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story. I really lik your style of writing- there's something very 'matter-of-fact' about it. I'm not sure if I'm describing it well, but it's very straightforward but still poetic.
I really like the image of Pam picking the bathing suit that makes her feel the least comfortable- shows that all of her insecurities and issues don't magically disappear when she and Jim start dating, and her steps towards independence are all linked to him; Fancy New Beesley is about more than just who she's currently seeing.
I can see how this could be a one-shot, but I really hope you write more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the comments! I hadn't thought to add on to this but maybe I will once I get more free time :)
Date: April 01, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Independent Pam, but with Jim. Nice!
Date: March 29, 2007 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff. I love independent Pam.
Date: March 29, 2007 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
free pam. still independent but with jim.
good story!
Date: March 29, 2007 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Really nice spring images, you can really feel Pam coming out of her shell.
Except that if she's swimming outside in Scranton in April, she's plain old CRAZY! LOL....Nice story, I love seeing FNB coming out to play.
Author's Response: haha! Well I'm from Arizona so I tend to forget that not everywhere in the country warms up in the spring as quickly as AZ. But we can pretend there was an usual warm front going through PA :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2007 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This is nice, happy Pam. Definitely how it should be. :-)