Date: November 25, 2009 08:59 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
That was some deliciously hot revenge. I kinda *loved* Karen in this.
You should consider a sequel. >:)
- Bird
Date: June 16, 2007 08:16 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
I don't know if this made me hate Karen or love her even more. Hmm...ok, love. Lots of love. But anyway, nice job with this, because I don't normally swing this way and I thought it was great.
Date: May 17, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
I hope they show this in tonight's finale. NBC is going to have to catch up to FOX eventually, right?. Love all the eye/eyelid imagery. Great story. Great ending!
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Karen is evil. Holy nutballs. That was some sexy revenge!
Date: March 30, 2007 11:33 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
This was HOT! I heart Karen/Pam smut so THANK YOU, hehehe. Fantastic job.
Date: March 29, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Oh, holy hell, that's vicious! It's amazing that she would get such satisfaction from be so evil even though realistically she has nothing to gain from it. Great story.
Date: March 29, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Whoa! Bitter, angry Karen and hot girly action! I loved it!
8 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Yeah Danbury! My boyfriend is from there. I've been the Staples there too, ha ha. I like this story- it's evil! Tarnishing the JAM before it even happens!
10 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Wow. Not just catty, but super-catty. I could probably leave a more insightful comment, but I'd need to dig through a thesaurus to find the words. My vocabulary just doesn't have what it takes to do this story justice.
Date: March 29, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Karen, for the Win.
Wow. This is amazing. Karen is sort of evil here with the major mind-fuck. I have never in my life before typed that word (or the second half of it, at least), but MAN! Twisted!
10 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2007 10:55 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
Yeah. She is truly EVIL.
and i'm evil for asking for a follow up chapter set a month or so later, right? ;-)
Date: March 29, 2007 10:35 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
Oh. My. You are soooo evil. So unbelieveably evil.
Author's Response:
Like a hobbit, my dear.
But at least I keep my evil naked. It's cuter that way.
Date: March 29, 2007 09:48 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
That was so Naughty. A victory indeed. What an awkward conversation that will eventaully lead to. You should write THAT! Hee.
Author's Response: Either an awkward conversation or a baggage-laden secret.....Karen's revenge.
Date: March 29, 2007 09:06 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
This is excellent. It's compelling and dangerous and bloodthirsty and surprisingly affecting.
Second person felt like a risky choice to me, but I think it really paid off; it makes it feel more personal and more nervous and tenuous, which makes the second-to-last paragraph even more startling and traffic-stopping.
I wish I had more constructive feedback, but I'm pretty sure you broke my brain.
Author's Response:
Bloodthirsty! Wow.
I'm glad you liked it, I was definitely going for that intimate feeling with the second person, and then the GAH when you realize what she/you are doing.....eeeeeeevil, like a hobbit.
Date: March 29, 2007 09:04 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
Sorry, one more comment.
Please tell me there is going to be another chapter this......PLEASE.
Author's Response: I don't know....I had planned on this one being a stand alone....If the mood strikes me, I'll add to it, but at this point, I'm leaving Evil! Karen in her Danbury hotel...
Date: March 29, 2007 08:53 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
You evil thing you...or wait, that would be Karen in this story. Very, very clever...in the nastiest sort of way. You were there first, for both of Them. Need to go put a bandaid on my brain now...well done! (OH - one thing - you have this rated as 'K'...surely it was an oversight, cause if ever a story was 'MA', this is it!)
Author's Response: GAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Thank you for catching that! YES. This is DEFINITELY MA, huh, lol? I think I've fixed it.....
Date: March 29, 2007 08:41 am Title: Karen, for the Win.
Wow, just wow. I have never commented on a story before. I just either liked them or I didn't. But this one brought me out of my shell.
Wow again. This is the most fantastically evil one ever in its own sly way. Kudos.
Author's Response:
Oh, my goodness. So, basically, I got to YOU first! :0
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!