Date: March 30, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, misty eyes! Gah! Very nicely done. So sweet I hate to leave. :(
Author's Response:
Oh, don't leave. Stay and read some more of the great fic on mtt. :)
Thanks for reviewing.
Date: March 30, 2007 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great mix of sweet, funny, sexy, angsty...really captures the sense of them being together long enough to have routines, yet still besotted with each other. I could really hear their voices (I feel very violate..hee!) and loved Pam's imaginary email and the band aid metaphor and that Jim is so urgent to know that he pulls into a gas station. And this line just sums it up: And like that, like always, he makes it a little easier (btw, I think you dropped the 'a' from that line ;-) Satisfied customer here.
Author's Response:
D'oh! Nothing like akey line in your fic to have a missing word.
Fixed it! Gracias.
And thanks so much for the review.
Date: March 30, 2007 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I too just loved this. Like someone else mentioned - it was the tiny details. I loved Pam's train of thought about her instinct kicking in and why they shouldn't be parents. As a mother of three I can totally relate to that scary feeling.
Great job!
Author's Response:
As I mentioned in another review, it’s nice to hear people who have experience this enjoyed it. Thank you so much!
Date: March 30, 2007 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, how beautiful! From the beginning, to the end, to the in-betweens, all that tension and disbelief and nervousness and anxiety, there's fluff and love and lots of hope - absolutely loved this.
Now he's the one who rips off her Band-Aids: loved that! And why they can't be parents - from the Lucky Charms to the cartoons to the Dwight - awesome. And how she can't assemble things. Her motherly instinct kicking in. The tiny details - the tiny details here don't only add to the effect of this already lovely story, it adds character - every bit of these are so JimandPam-y, even if you've just created it there and then, and - it's wonderful.
And my favourite line has to be the last one. ...she knows he doesn't mean just her. God.
Am I a sap or is it just Jim and Pam? I don't care, I love it all either way.
I have to go read this again. I loved this to bits!: I hope you get that. Because this is amazing stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. The whole thing was so nice and made me smile like a fool.
Thanks again!
Date: March 30, 2007 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I'm very happily married and totally in love with my husband and even though I'm in grad school I'm in a place in my life where it's not unreasonable to have a child. That said when we found out we were pregnant we almost had simultaneous panic attacks. I mean I was scared out of my mind! I like how you've portrayed that. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! As a single, childless gal, it's very nice to hear someone's opinion who has actually lived this. Capturing the fear of first time pregnancy was something I was worried about so I'm happy you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Really well done! It must be spring with baby-to-be fanfic in the air!
Author's Response:
Yes, I noticed some baby on the way fic being posted as I was finishing this fic up. Must be the weather. :)
Thanks for the reivew!