9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 12:50 am Title: Chapter 2
I liked this chapter even more than the last. Please keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope this will continue. I would LOVE to see a pic of John and Jenna dressed as you described them.
9 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really fun. I enjoy the film noir style. I'm looking forward to more of this.
8 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh, very interesting, very interesting indeed!
Date: July 22, 2006 05:43 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY! Love the way you've written this story--I feel like I really am watching a movie. This was super fun to read. Can't wait to see where it goes!
8 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Weeeee! More AU fic!!! I don't think I could ever do it - but this is great. Can't wait to see what else you've got planned. Excellent start!
8 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Detective Jim is hot, you're right. I'm definitely looking forward to more of this! And Jenna confirmed that it's Beesly, but she found out after she already chose her myspace address. Doesn't bother me, though.
8 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2006 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I loooove it. Very awesome. Your description of Pam as she stood at the crime scene was fantastic - I saw everything in my mind's eye. I can already tell that I have a new favorite story! Duncan Mifflin! Genius!!
One thing that drew me out of the moment a little - I thought Pam's name was spelled "Beesly"?
Author's Response: Ah. I actually deliberated over that spelling for a bit too long. I've seen it so many different ways, really. In the end I chose 'Beesley', cause, well, that's how Jenna has it on her Myspace. Hehe.
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2006 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. i love this. i can just picture jim in a trench coat with a fedora and fog all around him. i must say it really is quite a lovely image.
Author's Response: Hee, I know. The fedora gets me every time. *sigh*
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2006 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! AU! Looking forward to where this one goes -- especially since it has a "Mature" rating. ;)
Author's Response: heh, thanks! :D
9 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2006 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK, this is a great beginning for a story and it is very well written. More than anything, though, I'm imaginging them both in the fashions of the era, and whoo boy...
Author's Response: Yup, I love imagining them in these clothes. Writing Pam's entrance was so fun cause I can picture her so vividly in this sort of style. So cute!
Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2006 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! This is going to be so much fun to read! Don't keep us waiting with the updates.
Author's Response: Thank you! An update should be up soon.