Reviews For Pocket Change
Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: July 22, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. So well-written. I like the way you'd end a paragraph with a thought and retrieve it at the beginning of the next to start a new idea.
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: July 22, 2006 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I cannot believe I just wrote "very unique". *shudder*
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2006 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: July 22, 2006 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
The style and structure of this is amazing. You sustain the imagery beautifully. It has a very unique tone but it still feels very "Pam". Very nice.