Date: April 05, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
OK. Best first date ever. I love Phyllis' wedding being the catalyst for this. Lovely job.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked their date, it was so much fun to write! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 05, 2007 05:10 am Title: Chapter 3
I just noticed that you'd posted this story! Wow... I should pay closer attention, yes? :) Anyway, this, like all your work, just gets better each time I read it, and I thought I'd throw a little friendly support your way! Excellent memories of this one!
Author's Response: Thanks Mose! I always appreciate your friendly support :)
Date: April 05, 2007 02:24 am Title: Chapter 3
I love your Karen! Wouldn't an easy break like this be wonderful? *crosses fingers* Please write fast!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: April 04, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww. I want more!
And even though I don't think Karen (or anyone else, for that matter) would be quite that understanding, it was sweet of her.
Author's Response: Yeah I know, it's like the breakup everyone hopes for right? Still, I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: April 04, 2007 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jim putting the flower in Pam's hair? I died. I just up and died at my computer. That was so perfect.
But, I mean, "Poor Karen" and everything, of course. :)
Author's Response: You're going to have to tell me someday how you managed to write this review from the beyond. It does my heart good to know that there's still fanfiction in heaven. Glad you're liking the story, there will be more soon! Thanks for reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
I luxuriate in your details. It's the little details that make your story come alive. Like Pamorama and curling irons and things that don't seem like an obvious attempt at broadening the world. It's like the Office we watch is in 256 colors, and you ramp it up to 16-bit and beautiful. And, best of all, it feels natural. Can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Damn, I feel like i need to review your review. Thanks so much for all your support Doof!
8 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
More more more!
Author's Response: More soon, I promise!
Date: April 04, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, I loved this! Your details are amazing, and I laughed at many things.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad I could make you chuckle :)
Date: April 04, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I think that's cute though, Karen handled it well, and they're friends. Cuteness. MORE JAM PLEASE! Love this story update sooooonnnnn
Author's Response: There's plenty of JAM to come, don't you worry! Thanks for reading!
Date: April 04, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like Karen in this story, I'm glad you made her reasonable and mature, and not screaming and yelling at Jim.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like her! Somehow I don't think this is how she'll take it on the show....thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just wanted to pop in and say I think this is wonderfully written. i've really been enjoying your stories lately. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying them :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay! I really like this story. I felt myself thinking, "In your face Karen!", but that was mean. Right? :)
Author's Response: Maybe a bit mean, but the again, she is the one in the way of our beloved Jam ;) Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooooohh... ooh, oh oh, umm, yeah, right... post soon
Just sayin.
Author's Response: I wil, I will! Be patient! Thanks for stickin with the story :)
Date: April 03, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, poor Karen. But great developments! Finally, a parking lot that isn't necessarily filled with Doom for Pam and Jim...well, I guess that's dependent on how you envision the next chapter! More, please!
Author's Response: There might be a bit of doom in the parking lot coming their way, but trust me, it'll be worth it! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Keep driven woman!!! Don't stop till you reach New York!!
Author's Response: My thoughts exactly :)
Date: April 03, 2007 06:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh no. I had women fight for my bouquet at my wedding. Hopefully the better person who get it. Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
A Roy-less Phyllis' Wedding---fabulous...keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
My dear ms. Wendy Blue--two words, I have for you:
Keep writing!
Author's Response: Well it's actually already written, so win win win! It'll be up soon, thanks doof!
Date: April 02, 2007 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. You did a great job of setting the mood. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It'll be up soon!
Date: April 02, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this so much, that after I finished reading it, I flipped back to the main story page to see if "Yes" or "No" was listed under "Completed:"
Yay...we'll get more! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Yes you will get more! Sooner rather than later since all the chapters have been written. Thanks for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute! I really liked :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: April 02, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
GAH! best. cliffhanger. EVER!!! you're updating again in, what? 5 minutes???
seriously though, this is a really great fic so far. i like your writing style. you captured my attention from the very beginning. great job.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Lucky for you, I actually wrote all of the chapters awhile ago, so it won't take as long for me to update. But I have to leave you hanging for a little bit, just for fun ;) Thanks again for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cat fight!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, no kidding! That's actually what happens in the next chapter: Karen and Pam duking it out in a big vat of jello....okay not really. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this! xD I thought this was a oneshot - I'm awful at reading the things below the title and rating - but now I'm excited for the next installment.
Hey, did the bouquet land in Pam's hands first? Because I can't imagine her grappling for it, seeing as she wasn't very enthusiastic anyways.
It's still awesome.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you're liking it! About the bouquet...ummm...sure why not? Honestly I didn't really think about it; the image that I came up with when I wrote it was Karen and Pam both reaching half-heartedly for it and it magically landing in each of their hands. Far-fetched? Maybe. But that's the beauty of fanfiction right ;)? Thanks again for reading!
Date: April 02, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
fight! fight! fight! fight! ~Jim
I wish the episode had been more like this, although Ryan hitting the flowers away from Kelly was priceless.
I really liked your characterizations and the conversations between the characters. One tiny criticism- way too many fics have dresses hugging women in all the right places. It jerks me out of the story when I read it.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! And your critique is duly noted; that description just comes from me being unable to describe any part of the anatomy without blushing profusely ;) Thanks again reading!