Date: March 09, 2017 07:15 pm Title: Through Denim
so what happened over that year and a half? leave some clues
Date: June 27, 2007 11:40 am Title: Through Denim
Wow....just wow. So delicious.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Through Denim
Oh wow...just...OH WOW! I give you a standing ovationf for that wonderful piece of work!
::clicks the ADD STORY TO FAVORITES button::
Date: April 23, 2007 09:00 am Title: Through Denim
This is hot like WHOA! You did a fine job with the explicit sexin'... a FINE job.
Date: April 06, 2007 11:39 pm Title: Through Denim
You know I love this, but see? Everyone else does too! Nothing to be scared of :)
Author's Response: Thank you. You are the bestest beta ever.
Date: April 04, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Through Denim
Good job and great job reconstructing it.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I appreciate the comment about reconstructing it - it sucked.
Date: April 04, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Through Denim
Too.....Hot....Brain....Broken....no....words......
Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 06:16 am Title: Through Denim
Awesome!! This so does not suck....I applaud you :) This was WAY hot. Well done!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: April 03, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Through Denim
That was very nice! No rotten veggies here! I think I personally would have gotten Jim out of his denim (as an author, I mean, ahem!) a little sooner (and into Pam, she embarrassedly implied), but... this was nice, too!
Or, as I like to say ... thank you for the lovely smut.
I like the line: The "please" is what keeps you from opening the door. Also, "because seriously(?) how did you get to this place?" is perfect.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting on specific parts - that really helps me to "get" what works.
Date: April 03, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Through Denim
Whew. That was hot. I think I need a cold shower now. HA!
Feel free to write more smut - often ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm considering it.
Date: April 03, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Through Denim
holy shit
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA. Thanks, very eloquent.
Date: April 03, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Through Denim
uh, plot? Who needs plot? This was so amazingly intense. Just. Wow.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have no idea why I get so nervous about posting this stuff.
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Through Denim
Holy God...that was SO HOT. I read it twice and still can't come up with anything better to say. That was, just, yeah, write more of that kind if thing...please God.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Believe me, I've got other ideas for smut....maybe a series...I don't know.
9 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Through Denim
really good; i enjoyed it. it just was really sweet with some sexiness added. i really enjoyed it and well i don't know why but it brought a smile to my face
Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to go full-on physical at first...but I couldn't. I way too much of a girl - I gotta have the emotion too.
Date: April 03, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Through Denim
...*asplodes*
So. I love this in so many inappropriate ways. lkfajs;dklfj basically; there's not much else I can think of to say. <3
Author's Response: Why thanks.
Date: April 03, 2007 04:35 pm Title: Through Denim
Oh my. Let me just say that, no, this doesn't suck at all. So immediate, so palpable, so freaking HOT. The 2nd person narrative just magnifies the intensity and intimacy - and those aren't easy things to convey. And then the last couple of sentences - so tender, and so Jim and...just so well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Colette - that means a lot. I didn't know I was going to go 2nd person...and the first time I do - it's from Jim's POV, which is also a first. Huh, weird.
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Through Denim
Very Hot. Nice job. (so to speak!) ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks Moxie
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Through Denim
SO SO SO HOT.
Seriously, with the almost-fully-clothed-ness, and the against the door, and the thigh on the seam of her jeans, just-- yeah. YES.
I'm slightly incoherent. This is completely, completely fabulous. WELL DONE.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate the comment. Yeah, I seem to have a thing about sex-through-clothes ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Through Denim
okay so this was like the hottest thing ever.
Author's Response: I believe I've already thanked you for your support, but THANK YOU.
Date: April 03, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Through Denim
plot schmot, this is the part we all skip to anyway
i adore smut for the sake of smut and dry-humping is awesome
haha...good job
Author's Response: Ha - funny. Yes, in a weak moment, I have been known to skip the plot.