Date: April 09, 2008 07:50 am Title: Day 1: In which the Hunt expands
Ha! Creed. ;)
You're doing a nice job painting the picture here, and putting us in the season 2 moment. Dare I hope Roy catches hell for his past behavior? It's probably not in the scope of your story, so I'll just assume it. :)
Date: April 07, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Day 1: In which Dwight Becomes the Hunt
I’ve seen the way you look at him in these jeans - Ha!
Hi, Treble! I'm glad to see you back writing again. :)
Author's Response: Hi Too Late Kev!! It is actually really funny you just reviewed, because I am sitting here finishing up the next chapter and had just remembered that you are partly to blame for this mess of an idea!! In case you don't remember, we had a series of comments on my story Sorry or Please related to this... And here, a year later, I'm finally getting around to it! Thanks so much for reviewing! It is nice to be back. :)
Date: April 04, 2008 02:15 pm Title: Prologue: In which Dwight reflects on the hunt
Hee! Dwight! This is so old that I can't imagine you're planning on continuing it, but I wish you would! You nailed Dwight here. Great job.
Author's Response: haha Thanks!! I've always been a little sad that i didn't finish this, because i have it all mapped out in my head. We'll see how hard this writing bug has hit me. I would love to come back and finish it up at some point! Thanks for the review!
Date: April 09, 2007 07:11 am Title: Prologue: In which Dwight reflects on the hunt
Wow. Dwight... thats very Dwighty.
Author's Response: Haha mission accomplished. Don't worry, it won't all be Dwight centric! I just figured he was bizarre enough to get the story started on the right foot. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 06, 2007 12:28 pm Title: Prologue: In which Dwight reflects on the hunt
I really like this Dwight POV, and how you've slipped it into a point of time in canon. The details are so Dwight. It's incredibly believable that he checks the garbage cans. This is probably on the daily check list, along with watering the plants, cleaning the plant leaves, checking all weapons are ready to go, arranging Michael's toys in a pleasing manner, dusting the Bobbleheads, keeping aware of Liz Claiborne sales, and looking for animal scat. (I'm sure the list is far more extensive; this is preliminary only.)
I look forward to more.
Author's Response: I need to remember to thank you in the beginning of the next chapter, since our conversation about casual friday on my last story totally inspired this. Each chapter will be from a different POV (although it will focus around Dwight) so I'm hoping I don't scare people off with the first burst of Dwight in all his obssessive and freakish glory. Also, I may steal the think about keeping aware of Liz Claiborne sales. I have a good idea of how to use that. Thanks for reviewing!!!
Date: April 06, 2007 07:34 am Title: Prologue: In which Dwight reflects on the hunt
This is hilarious! I love the part about cardstock.
Sex panther! Even your comments are great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was so nervous about trying to be funny.. Thanks for reviewing!