Date: April 16, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Frigging hell girl, that is one amazing chapter. No matter how many times I read it (shhh) it gets better and better with each read. The ending nearly broke my heart- but I know that you've got Jammy goodness to come, you'd never not give the people what they want. Now I'm going to have to go and watch some more of my YouTube p-... errr... I'm going to go and relish in the amazingness of this last chapter and let my brain fully appreciate its perfect-ness. (how's that for 2 non-existant adjectives?) Can NOT wait until chapter 11.
Author's Response:
Couldn't have done it without your input, seriously -- I mean, just think, we'd have had longtim Jim (bwah) and his living room as the size of a closet!! Heeee. Seriously, though, thanks for the continued input/inspiration. And yeah...that youtube thing is...mm-hmm. :o)
Thanks again!
Date: April 16, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
review #100
how dare you leave us hanging like that?! But I am knd of glad they didnt just cuddle up and whisper I love you...because seriously they are too fucked up for that
I am excited to see how you fix this...or don't...hmm?
Author's Response:
Heh heh - and yes, I was going for something totally different than my usual sex-then-happy-smiles-and-puppies. :o) And I'm working it out...:O)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 16, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm sorry, but you cannot leave it like this for long. You better be writing the next installment this very second!! I can't wait for more!! --CH
Author's Response: Heh - I'm working on it, I promise!! THanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Lay into him Pam! She really needs to let Jim have it at this point. Thanks for the lovely image of Jim playing basketball. I don't know how many times I've re-watched that episode just to watch his incredible ball handling skills. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Isn't that just the best episode? Sigh.... Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh it is SO on ! I am loving angry Jim & angry Pam..so Hot !
Author's Response: I love that line from Dwight; Rainn is so cute sometimes. :o) Thanks for the review!
Date: April 11, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh no!! Jim, just drop it!!!
Oh, but I seriously hope that there's a screaming match between these two. It looks like it's what it's going to have to take to get their feelings out.
I probably shouldn't love anger this much.
Hee.
Thanks!
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response:
Oh, I would pay serious money to see those two have a screaming match - they totally need to. The season's not over yet.... :o)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh you are just evil.
And that's all I have to say about that.
.....or that may be the Pinot Grigio talking. Either way -update soon. Please? Thanks! LOL! I fully expect you to understand my drunken review. ;)
Author's Response:
As I read your review, I was picturing Paris, Dwight's short-lived Staples co-worker - ha! I love it when Pinot Grigio talks, though, don't you? :o)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Gah!!! So cliffhangery!
Author's Response:
Yesshhh, I am evil. Like a hobbit. :o)
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
WOW. Finally there will be a full out fight (ending up make-up sex????). I cannot wait to read what happens next. Seriously...you are just amazing.
Author's Response: I hope the fight is satisfying (as for the sex, well...heh). :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this Pam. I love how she didn't run in the gym, and I love how she has gone to his house to set things straight. I know that they keep talking about how she is "evolving" on the show, and becoming stronger, but I can't really see it. I really wish they would make her how you have written her. Love it, as always.
Author's Response:
I'm with you - I think she has taken some big steps, but I was really hoping by now that she'd give Jim some indication of what she's really feeling. But hey, the season isn't over yet, right?
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
...and things come to a head. Man, the tension! I will be stalking MTT for the next update to this story, that's for sure!
Author's Response: Oh the tension indeed! :o) THanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
I remember you writing that this would have 10 chapters, so I'm betting the big payoff is coming next...can't wait. With Jim as angry as he is now, I'm impatient to read how you're going to turn everything around.
Author's Response:
well as usual I accidentally lied - it'll end up being eleven chapters. :o) But I will work it out; I have a plan...muwaahahahaa!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Holy crap. As I said before- best dang chapter of this story (so far!) I could literally hear the squeaking sneakers on the court, and see the shock on Pam's face when she realized Jim was there. Add to that the set up of what is surely to be the battle to end all battles has me on the edge of my seat. Girl, rock it out! *riffs my (pretend) electric guitar*
Author's Response: Yay - -and thank you so much for all the input/insights/beta-ing goodness. Seriously - you've been a total godsend!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, such angsty goodness. I am LOVING this!
Author's Response: Oh yay - glad the angst isn't bringing you down! Thanks --
Date: April 11, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Even though I had a preview of where you were going with this...I was still riveted. The intensity between them at the b-ball court was positively pulsing...when he says: tell me how to act, Pam my stomach twisted in a knot (not even sure for which one of them!) God, I love angry Jim. And hell bent on confronting things Pam isn't bad either. Must have next chapter now (see? You've reduced me to a semi-verbal state!)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad to hear that -- seriously. Thanks for your pre-post input -- invaluable, I tell you!
Date: April 11, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
Angry, sweaty, sexy Jim!! About to get the smackdown from Angry!Pam ~~ write girl7, write like the wind!!!!
(So much for going to bed at a decent hour....)
Author's Response:
Heeee hehehehehe - "write like the wind!" Ah me.
You rock. :oD
Date: April 11, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is excellent, but you can't possibly expect me to give a wonderful coherent review when you've just shown me just-showered Jim wearing a T-shirt and jeans. So, just forget about that.
Plus, you've given us smutpromises for future chapters.
So, I just have to go think about these things for a while. (Jim, shower, T-shirt, jeans, smut. Rinse, lather, repeat.)
Author's Response:
I know. Is it wrong that I get carried away sometimes when I'm describing him? I'm definitely not a closeted hussy; that's for sure. :o)
Lather, rinse, repeat indeed.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so good! You are awesome.
Author's Response:
Why, thank you sir. [/Michael] (even if you're a ma'am...O)
Date: April 11, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, that was one original Karen-Jim breakup. Hats of to you!
Author's Response: Heh - torn apart by Ally McBeal. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 11, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love the way you showcase Pam's suffering. You make it seem as intense as Jim's was (still is). It's good that she's acting on it, by taking a cue from Jim's bravery.
Author's Response:
I'm glad - because really, I think they're both suffering so much. Guh.
THanks!
Date: April 11, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love how you included that oh-so-awkward kitchen scene from The Negotiation in here. It was perfectly integrated into the story you've built.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I really, really wanted to write that scene.
Date: April 11, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
*lets out a shallow breath*
duuude.
Okay, this chapter was filled with all kinds of most glorious angst, but I can't get past what Karen and/or Jim will explain how they broke up: all because of an episode of Ally McBeal. I know it's not all about that, but I can't help but think it.
And also, I have to say that as ridiculous as that show was, it's got some really AWESOME lines.
Anyway, I can't WAIT for where this is going. Because Jim can only be righteously indignant for so long...someone's going to have to slap him. Please let it be Angela or Kevin.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response:
Yes - that show was freaking ridiculous at times, but there were some awesome lines. And RDJ rocked when he was on there.
Someone's gonna slap him - heh, maybe it'll be Stanley!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 10, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
What an excellent break-up scene. I love how you handled this.
Author's Response: Yay - thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm actually cheering for Karen for once. She has certainly done the right thing. Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: Here's hoping she does it on the show.... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 10, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
Okay, now I love Karen. Good Karen. Even if it took Ally McBeal to help her realize it, she did the right thing.
Author's Response: "Good Karen" - heh. :o) Thanks so much!