Date: June 10, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
haha, I loved it.
"About this dad business..." Creed began, placing the paper towel down on the table. "Was your mother a waitress in a Howard Johnson’s back in the sixties? Blonde, great legs, voice like an angel?" That part made me chuckle. Creed is just...Well, Creed.
Great job!!
Date: April 11, 2007 09:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved Dwight in The Injury. I think that is what makes it one of my favorite episodes from Season Two (and by one of my favorite I unfortionatly mean about from every episode that season, because I love them all)
And Dwight's urine has been green, so why not light blue.
I think that was very Creedy. And very Injuried Dwighty.
Date: April 10, 2007 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. Creed scenes are like diamonds - rare and wonderful.
Typo - You misspelled vial one time as vile (maybe it's a vile vial!)
Creed's sentence "Always help me pay attention to those sales calls, though." has a typo - should be "helps". And Creed is actually on quality assurance, so I don't think he does any sales calls. (I can't find the exact quote, but at some point Creed says something like "Customers call me to ask if the paper is quality paper, and I assure them that it is.")
I love how you give a little backstory to why Dwight makes/says "Vietnam Sounds". Awesome.
I also love the "Ace". I think we first heard "Ace" in Valentine's Day (Thanks, Ace.), but just awesome callbacks here to Creed scenes in general.
This is fun, fun, fun!
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing out those two errors, I must have just had a moment of insanity :) I appreciate it.
I'm glad you liked it and the the whole "Ace" thing and Vietnam sounds was just too much fun to write. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: April 09, 2007 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha, this is great! I think the show itself has exaggerated Creed's character more than you did here, so yours worked very well as funny and weird but not over the top. I love his remembering "Dwayne" and trying to figure out who the mom might have been.
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't think Creed was too exaggerated, it's something that's hard to deal with. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 08, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha! This was great! The title and summary alone are priceless!
My absolute favorite part of The Injury was when Creed says, "When I was a teenager, I was in an iron lung." But the "Dad?" part is great too.
Dwight + Creed = comedic awesomeness
Author's Response:
The iron lung part is hilarious and I think that whole episode is just oozing great lines. I think its impossible for me to choose!
I'm glad you liked shan! You know how awesome you are, so it means a lot that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review ;)
Date: April 08, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! That's too funny.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Date: April 08, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
awesome, that was my favorite episode. I loved how fabulous Dwight was with Pam, I entirely forgot about the creed interactions. I loved the bit about the long legged waitress.
Author's Response: I think this is one of my favorite episodes too. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it!