Date: April 10, 2007 01:28 pm Title: "So That Was Different"
Sigh...there's no way having sex will do anything but bring these kids closer together. Bring it on! Oh, and this: "I'm not going to lie Pam, I want to fuck you." is awesome. I'll bet the writers wish they could actually get that on the air.
Author's Response: I'm so a sucker for straightforward dirty talk, flowery has it's place but man imaging Jim saying That just does it for me. Glad you agree
Date: April 10, 2007 01:16 pm Title: "So That Was Different"
Wow, Pam is really a good sport, willing to sleep with Jim and all that -- for the good of the friendship. Yeah, that's it.
Author's Response: Mother Theresa move over, Pam's sleeping with him for the good of mankind, I wish I could do that kind of public service.
Date: April 10, 2007 01:09 pm Title: "So That Was Different"
C'MON! You're chapters are too short it's killing me cause i love this story!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it and I'm sorry for being a tease!
Date: April 10, 2007 12:51 pm Title: "So That Was Different"
you are the biggest tease of all time! (and I know I wont be) but I hope I'm not dissapointed either! you've built this up so much! ahhh I'm going crazy!
p.s. I love nothing more than Jim saying "fuck" hot hot hot.
Author's Response: gah I know, see above response, but straightforwardlydirty!Jim is my new favorite.
Date: April 10, 2007 11:41 am Title: "So That Was Different"
LOVE it. Haha. I love direct Jim. Its very...um...hot. Haha.
Author's Response: Hahhaha I LOVE your review. Pam's so adorably ridiculous in this.
Date: April 10, 2007 09:39 am Title: "So That Was Different"
This is lots of fun. You've got to visit us over here on the fluffy side more often.
Author's Response: I'll try I'm sorry I just keep dreaming up angst!
Date: April 10, 2007 08:39 am Title: "So That Was Different"
I love how they are under this farce of what they think is maturity by going through these steps, but it looks to be just the opposite from the outside. Like analyzing how it felt different and question each other. It’s all very high school playing at something older. Very sweet. I love it.
Date: April 10, 2007 07:36 am Title: "So That Was Different"
ChaChing...
Date: April 10, 2007 07:09 am Title: "So That Was Different"
Dude. I knew this story had the potential to be awesome. Woo hoo! So excited for the next chapter!
In the first couple of chapters, I was concerned because I felt like Jim and Karen were way too out of character. But you've brought Jim back and now I'm completely hooked.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 07:01 am Title: "So That Was Different"
I am very much looking forward to their conversation after they have what is sure to be the best sex either of them has ever had. And when Jim tells Karen, "Well, I thought that would cure me, but man was I wrong!" ;-)
This is crazy, but oh-so-fun!!
Date: April 10, 2007 06:25 am Title: "So That Was Different"
This is great in a million ways. Wow. The kiss is amazing, and hey, Jim goes right for the breast!
I can definitely think that both of them would have a pretty immediate physical reaction to a kiss like that, and you described it so well. I like that Pam is very aware of Jim's reaction!
This is a fantastic line: she knows this is possibly the worst decision she’s made since, “June 10th sounds Great!” And, actually, I think it might be a pretty darn good decision. These two should totally knock boots. Hey, in a sequel, can they be wearing boots? Nah, but that does belong in a bad!fanfic, doesn't it?
I can tell you that I'm not at all disappointed at where this is going...
8 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 06:04 am Title: "So That Was Different"
Gahhh!! Love it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 06:00 am Title: "So That Was Different"
Dying here, seriously. I mean, we all knew that second kiss wouldn't be nothing, but damn. This is going to get nice and hot next chapter, I can feel it (not as much as they felt it, but still). Yay Jim/Pam "meaningless sex" that means a hell of a lot!!
Date: April 10, 2007 05:54 am Title: "So That Was Different"
Okay, I think they'd better add Spontaneous Combustion to the list of ailments covered under the DM health plan. Love how Pam is so aware of the uh, effect she's having on him, love her turning the tables/being in control of the situation...unbelievably hot. And as much as I'm enjoying the raw lusting here (how direct they're being) - I really love that Jim sheepishly gave her flowers, melted a little seeing her photos, is just a bit overwhelmed...he's so clearly not just a heat seeking missile, despite his denial (though, the idea that part of him is all about that, is just...yeah.) Tomorrow can't come soon enough.
Date: April 10, 2007 05:43 am Title: "So That Was Different"
Oh my god, I think I died when I read this: "I'm not going to lie Pam, I want to fuck you." There's something about the crude/non-flowery language that guys use that flips my switch. Jesus.
In addition -- the flipping on the back, the groping, the whimper(!), were unbelievably hot. *fans self* And that was just from a kiss!
And i forgot to comment in the last chapter about Jim showing up in a suit with wine and flowers. It was so sweet because to me, he was (subconsciously) thinking of the night as more than an appointment to have sex. Or at least that this is a situation Jim doesn't have much/any experience with. Pam either. Reminds me of the line from Pretty Woman - "I appreciate the whole seduction scene you got going here, but I'm a sure thing."
Anyway...excellent chapter. I'll be checking back hourly often for the next one! (And I saw that you changed your rating! Wheee!)
Date: April 10, 2007 05:36 am Title: "So That Was Different"
“Somehow I’m finding that harder and harder to believe.”
I want to TWSS! at that so much I literally yelled at it.
I love this. I love the premises, and I love the idea, and I love the way things are going, because - heh, I love the MA rating I see here. ;) I cannot wait, at all, for an update. I'm going to stick here to my seat and wait.
Date: April 10, 2007 03:52 am Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
YAY! More, this is good, I wana know what happens NOW please! lol <33
Date: April 09, 2007 11:33 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
I love how casually Jim asked Pam for sex. And, he was certainly able to rationalize it to Karen pretty well. I'm buying it for now. I would like to see their second kiss contain some sparks! And, they really shouldn't even make it out of the house. Once they've kissed a few times, they should just make their way to the bedroom.
Date: April 09, 2007 11:20 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Hopefully the second kiss evokes passion...lol Update soon!!!
Date: April 09, 2007 09:12 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Hurrah! You promise more. Will it be before or after I finally start my homework? The only solution is to refresh this page constantly and get no homework done at all.
Date: April 09, 2007 08:50 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Ack! you're killing me here! I'm absolutely loving this so far, so please please put us all out of our misery and give us that second kiss soon. Great work! I'm going to go scream into my pillow now. ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 08:28 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Consider the toll paid!
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me
SO IF the next xhapter is already written, then you should post it. Like now, please.
Date: April 09, 2007 08:16 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Ahhh!! You are cruel with your cliff-hangers. I am so looking forward to reading when they realize they still do have feelings for each other!
Date: April 09, 2007 07:39 pm Title: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?
Oh, I *know* that second kiss is gonna blow 'em out of the water. Get hoppin' on that update! :)