1 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2021 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww man. I love Kelly written seriously, and you've really captured the longing and insecurity and desperation of both Jim and Kelly here.
1 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2019 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very cute. I like that you give us a slow transition over into Kelly's POV at the end. Very nicely done.
Date: February 14, 2008 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, how heartbreaking. That was beautiful. =)
Date: February 13, 2008 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This a great look at not just Jim or Kelly, but at, like, humanity. Is unrequited love better than not knowing love?
Um, yeah, I liked this. Didn't mean to get all philosophical.
Date: March 02, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so beautifully written and heartbreaking. A really interesting look at Kelly. I love it.
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
ugh! so good! very realistic with how kelly would act. great job!! =)
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I found this over at ff.net and came here to see if it was posted and lo and behold, here it is! I love the dynamic you've created between Jim and Kelly.
8 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2006 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Still catching up on stuff. This is a really really well-done fic. I'm starting to love Jim/Kelly fic and this is a great one. Terribly sad, perfectly in character. Loved it.
7 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad, yet lovely. At first, I afraid they might hook up, but I'm really glad that they didn't - it would have too "out of character."
The last line broke my heart.
Date: July 24, 2006 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
i feel like i use "hearbreaking" in the reviews i leave for you...but it's true! your writing always gets to me because of your spot-on characterizations and the way you portray immense emotion without being overly dramatic or showy. just lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww. So sad and wonderful. You nailed Jim and Kelly (ok, TWSS, but you know what I mean). And the premise is very realistic: the opposite-sex friend who you're not too close to, but then one night you get trashed together and say things you don't mean to...
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
That seriously just made me cry. Aww..sad Jim is still so lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story - especially the last line.
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah, so sad. I could totally see Kelly inviting herself into his living room so she wouldn't be alone, and him letting her. That last line is poignant.
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so, so sad. It brought me back to college, when you sometimes ended up spending the evening getting wasted with someone you barely knew, just because they were there and it was better than being alone.
“Yeah, I mean, they’re putting us on TV. That’s how bad it’s gotten.” - ha!
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 06:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my. This just about killed me. Poor Jim. Poor Kelly. Poor, poor nqllisi. Hee.
6 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is good! I like the dynamic you've got going here, and the premise is GREAT for a Jim/Kelly fic. Poor sad drunk Jim.
8 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 01:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, I really like the premise/timeframe of this! "They're putting us on tv" made me laugh and I liked perceptive Kelly asking if she was interrupting brooding. And the end is really great -- his confession, her already knowing, him trying to make her feel better about Ryan and that last line! Oh, Kelly.
Date: July 24, 2006 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Um. Wow.
So unique and incredible and insightful.
*rereads*
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2006 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooo. OUCH.
And...sigh...just lovely.
You kill me. You really do.