Date: November 07, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Confusion
Ok, so you know you just added to your problem right...updating just makes me want you to update again! Especially since she's opening up to Jim now! I want to see what happens now...I'm sure her continuing to open up to Jim will be cathartic for you right? Not as hard...come on....lol. You have created an addict in me with this story. So amazingly heartfelt and real. I love the way you described Pam's break down in that it wasn't about crying, but just that she couldn't talk anymore. Just couldn't summon the energy. This is so, so, so good. Please update soon.
Date: November 07, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Confusion
I'm glad that you updated, this was really wonderfully done, again. I think you are so brave to attack this subject and you've done it in a very realistic and respectful way. This was a terrific chapter, and I think that you've got Pam just right here. I can see her ignoring Jim and then choosing to take that step in the middle of the night. Well done. Hope we see more soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2007 01:10 am Title: Confusion
Thank you so much for updating, even if it was tougher for you to write it was still absolutely amazing. This is by far my favorite story on here even if its depressing and sad and all that crap, I love it and it has so much realness and meaning and its just so Jim and Pam. Your brilliant, cannot wait for the next one.
Date: November 06, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Confusion
This is such an amazing story. Thank you for updating!
Date: November 06, 2007 09:16 am Title: Confusion
Fabulous story! Please continue.
B
Date: November 06, 2007 08:46 am Title: Confusion
thank you for the update. i really like your story. it's very emotional & i like to read that.
Date: November 05, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Weak
ok so first off I just wanted to let you know that this is my first review...ever. I've been reading stories here for a while but never joined the site. I've been tempted to join before but not until i read this last chapter did I do it.
I absolutely love this story. I know it's a more dark one, but I like how you've taken these characters from a show and made it into it's own story. i know that doesn't really make sense. What I'm trying to say is that even though i love the office, i like how you can make the story different from the show. It's almost as if you don't even need to know the back story of the show to be interested in your story.
so basically after saying all of that, I just want to say great job! I look forward to more updates.
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Confusion
I do like it and of course love that it is now moving in a more positive direction. I'll be interested to see how you have Pam heal. I really really like the theme of Jim being a man of action. He truly is, even though sometimes it seems to take him a little while to figure it out. This situation seems to have prompted him to act quickly, and rightly so. Great job on the story! Keep it up, please!!!
Date: November 05, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Confusion
this is fantastic!! i get super excited when i see that you've updated. i seriously can not wait for the rest.
Date: November 05, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Weak
I have Shame bookmarked as favorite and check it almost everyday for updates. BEST DAY EVER!! It is the best story on the web. Thanks for updating!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 08:14 am Title: Confusion
OOHHHH, I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I've been waiting for another chaoter since MTT was down and you posted the first few chapters on the MTT boards, and I read all six chapters in Google's cache! I was in the middle of NaNo-ing when I saw that this chapter was updated, and I had to leave my writing and read this new chapter!
This chapter did not disappoint. Jim is so amazing. And Pam is so sad, and I love that his actions are helping her feel better, like when she felt the warmth of the sun again for the first timne in a long time. I love that she finally read his e-mail and came over to his house in the middle of the night.
I can't wait for more!!!
Date: November 05, 2007 12:55 am Title: Weak
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE...update soon. This is an absolutely fantastic story.
Date: November 04, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Confusion
Awww that was great! I'm so happy that Pam is making some positive progression and that Jim has a hand in it---how wonderful to offer her a place to stay so that she can get away from the scene of her attack. I hope things keep getting better for her (and them), even though I know there will be setbacks along the way
Thanks so much for updating!
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Confusion
It seemed like I was waiting forever for the update, but so worth it! Keep it coming! :o)
Date: November 04, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Confusion
This chapter was by far the best yet. You're an amazing writer. Don't feel bad about the depression during the writing, either - it proves you're really invested in your work and that's far better than anything anyone who writes at the drop of a hat can say.
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 06:18 pm Title: Confusion
I re-read the last couple chapters before reading this. You did such a great job. I can imagine how hard it must be to keep up with a story dealing with this subject matter. I'm glad to have this little light at the end of the tunnel : )
Date: November 04, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Confusion
Wow. For a story so upsetting I was ridiculously excited to see this update. This is seriously one of the most amazing stories I've read on this site and you're doing such a wonderful job having the characters deal with such a hard situation. And thanks for giving Pam a break, she was breaking my heart.
Date: November 04, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Confusion
Yay hope. Hope is good. I can't wait for the next update!
Date: November 04, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Confusion
More please.
Date: November 04, 2007 11:41 am Title: Confusion
This was INCREDIBLE!!! I was dying to know what would happen next, what wonderful thing Jim would do for her. This was better than anything I could have imagined. I was so excited when I saw that you updated. I did a happy dance. This story is amazing. This chapter was amazing! Thank you for suffering through it for us. You're awesome. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 11:11 am Title: Confusion
I know how hard it is to write through a story when it's giving you trouble. Thanks for making the effort - this is a great story!
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 09:39 am Title: Confusion
I'm not normally a fan of anything angsty but I'm really enjoying this story.
Date: November 04, 2007 09:08 am Title: Weak
This is one of the best written, most honest stories I have honestly ever read. I can imagine how hard it is for you to write this and to put yourself in a Pam-like mindset for it, but we all really appreciate it. I was so happy when I saw that you updated, and even more happy when I read that Pam is finally coming to grips with everything and is ready to move on. Just....thank you. This is beautiful.
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 08:39 am Title: Confusion
like so many other readers, i waited so long for this update and gritted my teeth when i saw it listed in the 'new' stories pile. and, as i braced myself for the worst, i was so pleasantly surprised. i really like the revelation of what jim's email contained. nice job...it must have been an impossible chapter to write.
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 08:11 am Title: Confusion
this was fantastic. I know that Pam still has a lot of work to do, thank the Lord I have never been sexually assaulted but I know it is something that is not easy to get over, especially when it happens in your own home. I squealed when I saw you updated this. I can understand you being a little depressed writing it, and I'm glad you left the story with Pam showing a teensy bit of growth. Its hopeful and I love that.