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Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 07:37 pm Title: Worry

So I sat down at my computer, planning to read a few fanfics and leave. I came across this one, and read the first chapter. I have been obsessed ever since. I did not stop between any chapter and kept going, hoping it would never end.

I realized how much I miss normal Pam! I really, really can't wait for the chapter to come where they are completely honest with each other, face-to-face.

This story is amazing, bottom-line. You captured their emotions perfectly, and, though it was painful to read (as in, I don't like to read about them suffering to such a degree, but I can't help it because it's so good), it was really, really quite exceptional.

Amazing work, Athena. Amazing.

Reviewer: Northern_Star Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2009 03:05 pm Title: Worry

This was really, good! you've got the emotions down and it made me teary eyed. loved it. can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2009 07:45 am Title: Worry

I know this hasn't been updated in a while and probably won't be again (no matter how desperately I want it to :() I just felt the strong urge to comment on this beautiful story. I've just re read it and this time round, a lot of it really hit home and broke my heart in places. It's so wonderful and powerful and you capture the emotional complexities of both Pam and Jim incredibly. That passage that you quoted and the references to just not being able to be yourself again are sooo true and perhaps that's why it was so emotional for me to read again because of how much I can relate to it (Not exactly, but enough). Anyway, I just felt I needed to add a comment, commend you on this and plead that one day it will get finished. Thank you for this :)

Reviewer: Cricket Songs Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2009 11:10 pm Title: Worry

So this is the first story that I've read here on this site. I created an account just to read it. First review I've ever left for an Office fanfic.

Because it's amazingly well-written, and the angst is just right, and you're a great author and I really, really hope (with cherries on top) that you'll update it soon? c:

I'll look forward to reading more~!

- Cricket

Reviewer: angalee75 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 03:59 pm Title: Weak

It's such a heartbreaking story. Please continue with this.

Reviewer: jollyholly Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2009 05:10 pm Title: Weak

Yesterday was the 2 year anniversary from when this story was first published here..thought it'd be a good time to leave a review...love this story!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Worry

love this story... wish there was more updates!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 08:34 pm Title: Worry

Are you kidding me? PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 08:24 pm Title: Patience

You're killing me with this, awesome, you're awesome. This is amazing.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 08:06 pm Title: Confusion

That was so beautiful wow, him giving her a key and her actually using it.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 07:52 pm Title: Hate

You're very talented =)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 06:57 pm Title: Fear

You actually made me cry, wow.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 06:40 pm Title: Remorse

OMG this is getting so amazing. Seriously you are such an amazing writer.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 06:25 pm Title: Guilt

Your writing is amazing. I hope you finish this.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 06:09 pm Title: Pain

I want to hug her omg :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2009 05:48 pm Title: Weak

urm omg okay this is amazing. Pam needs Jim so much right now :(

Reviewer: jollyholly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 01:15 pm Title: Weak

Please please update...with sugar on top?

Reviewer: dd88 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25, 2009 09:45 am Title: Weak

I've also been waiting a year for this to be updated. PLEASE continue it.

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2009 10:47 pm Title: Weak

ah alas no update :(

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2008 06:06 pm Title: Weak

Sigh.  I was hoping for a christmas miracle. 

Still no updat.

 

me

Reviewer: Nikki Alexander Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2008 10:13 am Title: Worry

Wow. Just...I just spent the last hour or so reading this and I'm upset that I can't properly express just how amazing it was. I'm a big fan of Jam fluff, but this is just...I can't even think of a word good enough. Just know that there were plenty of big fat tears that rolled down my face while reading this because of just how moving it is. I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Starwitness Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 09:02 am Title: Worry

I love this story. Normally this subject matter makes me squirm but it's so well written and very well handled. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 04:41 am Title: Weak

Girl, it's been almost a year.  Can you just give us all a little break?  We are DYING over here.  I would LOVE to see the end of this story, just to know that my story can have a happy ending too.

luchy

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Remorse

Please update soon! I miss this story!

Reviewer: stjoespirit04 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Weak

Wow, that was intense... I really hope you come back and finish this, I was on the edge of my seat for all 9 chapters!! Phenomenal writing, great descriptions, amazing verbage... I'm impressed!!

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