Date: June 07, 2007 03:29 pm Title: Fear
wahhhh oh god is this painful. but oh so good.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Fear
wow, such a powerful update. I love reading your story because it really gets to me, really makes me feel something. The writing is so wonderfully good, your descriptions of Jim's face and eyes while talking to Pam was so good. I'll try to be patient until the next update, but I will say I hope I don't have to wait too long. Thanks once again for sharing this story with us all.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Fear
Wow - the bedroom scene broke my heart - Jim's picturing what happened. This is amazingly powerful. This line, "When her door shuts behind him, he stands outside like a lost child, not knowing what to do." painted such a melancholy picture. Just wow.
Date: June 07, 2007 12:34 pm Title: Fear
I completely love this story. Weird but true, but it's because you can feel it, deep in the recesses of my heart. I can feel pain pouring out of Pam and Jim and want nothing but happy things to happen for them, but living in the real world we all know that's not always going to happen. I guess it's nice to feel something other than giddy goodness for these 2 but to feel the distance between them and how bad they wish it was different. I'm probably rambling but you probably know what I mean. Thanks for writing this and please please don't stop.
Date: June 07, 2007 11:33 am Title: Fear
This story is so incredibly sad but so incredibly well written...I really really wanted Jim to just wrap his arms around her so she could cry into him and release everything she's been hiding, but i know that's a long long way off
thanks for updating
Date: June 07, 2007 10:36 am Title: Fear
You are a very tallented writer. This story is beautiful and heart-breaking and so real. The missing window-pane, the row of dead flowers, it's so haunting. But, in a good way. You're awesome. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow! I'm glad you spotted the dead flowers and missing window-pane. I was worried that my readers wouldn't remember that I was referencing chapter 3. You are very astute! Thanks again!
Date: June 07, 2007 10:27 am Title: Fear
Wow, Athena. You're doing such an amazing job with this. I really feel for both Jim and Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 09:13 am Title: Fear
I love this story! I like that it's taking a while. That Pam really is trying to hide the fact that she was raped, but that she's so wounded that she can't. Even Karen picked up on the fact that something was wrong.
Now that you're all settled, find a good writing place and keep this story going!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 08:57 am Title: Fear
I was so excited when I woke up this morning and discovered that you had updated! I just have to say that.
And now I will be anxiously (and I really do mean anxiously) awaiting for you to update again soon! I love this story! It's so heartbreakingly intense and...SO GOOD! So, so good!
Date: June 07, 2007 08:17 am Title: Fear
oh how can you end it there? I have a lump the size of a fist in my throat...she can't leave him outside! He can't leave!
As you can probably tell, I really love this. I understand it is hard to write though, so I will patiently wait for the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 06:00 am Title: Fear
Sorry i'm late to review. This story is so sad and so well written. I'm sure it's difficult to write but you've got a loyal reader in me.
Date: June 07, 2007 05:50 am Title: Fear
oh my goodness... my heart breaks AGAIN reading this. i just can't imagine... and jim's trying to be so strong but he's so hurt. and realizing that he was a jerk... i'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. this is wonderfully heartbreaking.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 04:54 am Title: Fear
Wow. This story is just so..intense. In a good way. You make me feel like they do - I actually have tears in my eyes. I cannot wait for more.
Date: June 07, 2007 01:07 am Title: Weak
This story is really hitting me hard. I can't stop reading, and it's teriffically written, but my god - I seriously had tears going down my face. Looking forward to the update.
Date: June 03, 2007 09:55 am Title: Remorse
wow... this is... intense. I can't wait to see how it ends!
Date: June 03, 2007 04:59 am Title: Weak
We need a new update! I'm really enjoying your story, because it's so different from everything else on MTT, but also because it's sooo well written. I love all the emotions. Please update soon!
luchy
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. Actually, I'm writing the next chapter now. I've been having trouble doing it because I've been in the process of moving, and well. . .we all know how that goes. Now that I'm mostly settled, I can continue! Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Remorse
Just got back from a vacation, no internet time, and one of the first things I did was check for an update her. This was an especially moving chapter, I think you nailed Jim's reaction. It was painful, but most importantly real. I don't usually get teary reading fanfic, but you got me here. I hope you update again soon. And thank you for sharing this with us.
Date: May 19, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Remorse
This is so, so painful but gorgeous. Your reaction from Jim was very believable, and I'm looking forward to seeing how he confronts her with this new knowledge...
Date: May 16, 2007 06:16 pm Title: Remorse
I think I'm in love. This was just... WOW... Jim was just wow. Perfect just god all mighty if I were to imagine Jim finding out something like this you wrote it exactly like I would see it, Because I'm pretty damn sure its how the character would react anyway. God I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: May 16, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Remorse
I thought Jim's reaction was perfect. This may sound morbid, but I was hoping he'd cry. Yeah, that sounds morbid. But, see, it's just the most realistic reaction for him, I think. He loves her so much. You did a great job with this chapter. I understand if it takes you awhile to update, because it is a hard type of story to write. You just take your time and do your best. And you are doing the best I have ever seen. So, I love you. I throw flowers, not garbage. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much! That really makes my day! No, I don't think it's morbid, This story is a bit morbid, but imagine that this actually happened on the show (Oh, I would die) people would be like "What the crap!?" if Jim didn't cry. I would hope he would cry, too. Thanks again!
Date: May 16, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Remorse
that was so intense. the way u described jims reaction was so overwhelming. i hope to read more of this.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Remorse
Oh. My. God.
That was one of the most intense things I think I have ever read. Every time you post a chapter, I keep thinking, how will this (the situation) ever get any better? It's so painful and real and serious and heartbreaking. But I seriously can't wait for more. Because I have hope that things will start to get better for Pam. And now for Jim. And as you are a fluff girl, I'm hopeful for...a hopeful ending, LOL. That things will be looking up for these two.
More, please?
Date: May 16, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Weak
Athena, this was just so so so good. Honestly, what a gamut of emotions Jim would go through. I think you captured this so honestly. I've never been through anything like this personally but I have to think this is exactly what a friend would feel. I also have to tell you how excited I am at the prospect of having such a great story to read even after the season finale tomorrow. I'll be looking forward to this unfolding throughout the summer. Thanks so much for such a great, deep and thoughtful read.
Author's Response:
LoveFool, that means the world coming from you because I'm know you are one of the best writers on this site. I love just everything you write, so, I thank you.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Remorse
oh my gosh. wow. that was... intense. i mean, i hate to say i love this story, but it's so well written i just can't help it. you've made it seem so real and scary and... just... wow. i knew that when jim found out he'd blame himself. i just feel sorry for pam even more now b/c he's going to want to push her into talking about it. this is going great places and i'm enjoying it.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Weak
OK - wow again. I've been able to absorb this story more and this time I hope I can be a bit more articulate. I want to say thank you for taking such an ugly and horrible scenario and presenting it in such a touching way. I see a lot of your readers have the same issues that I do, that they don't want to be 'enjoying' this story because of the subject matter. You've created a compelling story line that draws you in and sucks you into the pain that Pam is feeling. It's been an amazing experience to read this, so thank you again, and please update again soon if possible.
I just have one tiny correction. You are using the word 'gentile' a lot, but I think that you mean 'gentle'. Not a huge deal at all, but I thought I'd let you know.