10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 08:57 am Title: Fear
I was so excited when I woke up this morning and discovered that you had updated! I just have to say that.
And now I will be anxiously (and I really do mean anxiously) awaiting for you to update again soon! I love this story! It's so heartbreakingly intense and...SO GOOD! So, so good!
Date: June 07, 2007 08:17 am Title: Fear
oh how can you end it there? I have a lump the size of a fist in my throat...she can't leave him outside! He can't leave!
As you can probably tell, I really love this. I understand it is hard to write though, so I will patiently wait for the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 06:00 am Title: Fear
Sorry i'm late to review. This story is so sad and so well written. I'm sure it's difficult to write but you've got a loyal reader in me.
Date: June 07, 2007 05:50 am Title: Fear
oh my goodness... my heart breaks AGAIN reading this. i just can't imagine... and jim's trying to be so strong but he's so hurt. and realizing that he was a jerk... i'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. this is wonderfully heartbreaking.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2007 04:54 am Title: Fear
Wow. This story is just so..intense. In a good way. You make me feel like they do - I actually have tears in my eyes. I cannot wait for more.
Date: June 07, 2007 01:07 am Title: Weak
This story is really hitting me hard. I can't stop reading, and it's teriffically written, but my god - I seriously had tears going down my face. Looking forward to the update.
Date: June 03, 2007 09:55 am Title: Remorse
wow... this is... intense. I can't wait to see how it ends!
Date: June 03, 2007 04:59 am Title: Weak
We need a new update! I'm really enjoying your story, because it's so different from everything else on MTT, but also because it's sooo well written. I love all the emotions. Please update soon!
luchy
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. Actually, I'm writing the next chapter now. I've been having trouble doing it because I've been in the process of moving, and well. . .we all know how that goes. Now that I'm mostly settled, I can continue! Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Remorse
Just got back from a vacation, no internet time, and one of the first things I did was check for an update her. This was an especially moving chapter, I think you nailed Jim's reaction. It was painful, but most importantly real. I don't usually get teary reading fanfic, but you got me here. I hope you update again soon. And thank you for sharing this with us.
Date: May 19, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Remorse
This is so, so painful but gorgeous. Your reaction from Jim was very believable, and I'm looking forward to seeing how he confronts her with this new knowledge...
Date: May 16, 2007 06:16 pm Title: Remorse
I think I'm in love. This was just... WOW... Jim was just wow. Perfect just god all mighty if I were to imagine Jim finding out something like this you wrote it exactly like I would see it, Because I'm pretty damn sure its how the character would react anyway. God I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: May 16, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Remorse
I thought Jim's reaction was perfect. This may sound morbid, but I was hoping he'd cry. Yeah, that sounds morbid. But, see, it's just the most realistic reaction for him, I think. He loves her so much. You did a great job with this chapter. I understand if it takes you awhile to update, because it is a hard type of story to write. You just take your time and do your best. And you are doing the best I have ever seen. So, I love you. I throw flowers, not garbage. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much! That really makes my day! No, I don't think it's morbid, This story is a bit morbid, but imagine that this actually happened on the show (Oh, I would die) people would be like "What the crap!?" if Jim didn't cry. I would hope he would cry, too. Thanks again!
Date: May 16, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Remorse
that was so intense. the way u described jims reaction was so overwhelming. i hope to read more of this.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Remorse
Oh. My. God.
That was one of the most intense things I think I have ever read. Every time you post a chapter, I keep thinking, how will this (the situation) ever get any better? It's so painful and real and serious and heartbreaking. But I seriously can't wait for more. Because I have hope that things will start to get better for Pam. And now for Jim. And as you are a fluff girl, I'm hopeful for...a hopeful ending, LOL. That things will be looking up for these two.
More, please?
Date: May 16, 2007 12:52 pm Title: Weak
Athena, this was just so so so good. Honestly, what a gamut of emotions Jim would go through. I think you captured this so honestly. I've never been through anything like this personally but I have to think this is exactly what a friend would feel. I also have to tell you how excited I am at the prospect of having such a great story to read even after the season finale tomorrow. I'll be looking forward to this unfolding throughout the summer. Thanks so much for such a great, deep and thoughtful read.
Author's Response:
LoveFool, that means the world coming from you because I'm know you are one of the best writers on this site. I love just everything you write, so, I thank you.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Remorse
oh my gosh. wow. that was... intense. i mean, i hate to say i love this story, but it's so well written i just can't help it. you've made it seem so real and scary and... just... wow. i knew that when jim found out he'd blame himself. i just feel sorry for pam even more now b/c he's going to want to push her into talking about it. this is going great places and i'm enjoying it.
Date: May 16, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Weak
OK - wow again. I've been able to absorb this story more and this time I hope I can be a bit more articulate. I want to say thank you for taking such an ugly and horrible scenario and presenting it in such a touching way. I see a lot of your readers have the same issues that I do, that they don't want to be 'enjoying' this story because of the subject matter. You've created a compelling story line that draws you in and sucks you into the pain that Pam is feeling. It's been an amazing experience to read this, so thank you again, and please update again soon if possible.
I just have one tiny correction. You are using the word 'gentile' a lot, but I think that you mean 'gentle'. Not a huge deal at all, but I thought I'd let you know.
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 10:06 am Title: Remorse
Oh. My. Goodness. This story is...amazing. Everything about it, the emotions of the parties that are involved and...wow. Keep updating! Please!
Date: May 16, 2007 09:33 am Title: Remorse
Jim's reaction was really real. I think you've captured everyone so well in thsi tragedy.
Date: May 16, 2007 08:51 am Title: Remorse
This is so powerful and moving. You're doing such a good job with it.
Date: May 16, 2007 08:50 am Title: Remorse
That was a great chapter. I think you did a good job of contrasting what Karen saw and what Jim was feeling. It's fair to say that Jim would be completely sick about what he'd found out and you wrote that well. Hope you can update soon :)
Date: May 16, 2007 08:14 am Title: Remorse
absoluely no garbage coming from here. were all our worst critics, this really was awesome, it got me all frazzled and upset, so thats a good sign.
(oh, and just one teeny correction, "how she beamed when he finally excepted." In that form it should read accepted. Not a huge deal, but I don't want the grammar Nazis to come after you...they are scaarry.)
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you! Ya know, the horrible part is that I'm an English major, and I knew the correct spelling, I just completely forgot. Thank you for pointing that out, I really missed that!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 06:49 am Title: Remorse
You can't take this long to update anymore! I really like how you've captured Jim's emotions and his desperation. You really have to update faster; this story is wonderful and honest to the feelings/situation you're trying to capture. Well done.
Date: May 16, 2007 06:20 am Title: Remorse
This story is AMAZING...horrible topic don't get me wrong but you put so much feeling and emotion in it, just amazing. I think you nailed Jim's reaction, so profoundly affected by the revelation that he can't even function....I can't wait to see what happens when he finally sees Pam
MORE SOON!
Date: May 16, 2007 05:51 am Title: Remorse
I feel funny saying that I'm enjoying this story because well......Pam. But this is insanely good. So well written. I look forward to your next installments.