1 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2021 01:38 pm Title: Weak
Me encanta cuando las historias me hacen sentir, fÃsicamente, algún tipo de emoción. Tu historia me hizo llorar, literalmente. Mi primer y único review por ahora es para esta historia, que me emocionó y que ojalá algún dÃa retomes.
1 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2019 06:48 pm Title: Worry
Ah, the classic "I'm not done yet" and "to be continued." I hope you decide to someday, because this is really amazing work, but I understand that the odds are low. Thanks for sharing this.
Date: September 13, 2016 04:33 am Title: Hate
Tough subject matter but definitely a very compelling read! I have to stop here for now but this chapter has quite the cliffhanger it's very difficult to not hit next!
Date: April 03, 2016 11:15 pm Title: Worry
Athena, of all the WIP on this site, this is the one I would like most to be finished. I hope you can come back and conclude this stunning story. I worry about you, based on some of your chapter notes, that maybe this story hits a little too close to home for you. But I think this story can give you strength and healing, and other people as well who have suffered trauma. Please know that there are people out here who wish you good health and peace.
Date: September 15, 2013 02:04 am Title: Worry
Wondering if you'd consider coming back to this. I just wanted to write and say how much I enjoyed it and how much I'd love to read the end, if you're inspired to write it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2011 01:14 am Title: Worry
This was such a great story. I love dark stories, and I liked that you had something bad happen to Pam after the merger when Jim wasn't emotioally available. I love how Jim totally broke when he found out. I wish they had hugged once or twice, but that is just me projecting my own needs onto them. (How's that for some support group babble!) I loved that Jim offered his house and that she eventually took him up on it.
I think you should change this story status to "Complete" because it really can end there. There is hope that she is getting better and hope they will someday be a couple.
Thanks for writing and sharing this with us.
Date: October 07, 2010 11:23 am Title: Weak
I still check this almost every week, so I've been doing for a very long time now. I'm dying to have this come to an end. Please please. Just one more chapter!
Date: August 16, 2010 07:03 pm Title: Worry
I just found this story today, and I know that it's been forever since you updated, but please, please, please update! This story is really fantastic (in a heartbreaking way) and I love it. I think you're showing Pam's progress wonderfully and I really love Jim's point of view.
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2010 01:39 pm Title: Worry
WOW! What a way you have of telling an absolutely tragic tale! It's just unreal how you were able to put each personso abslutely u=into carachter and the way you have with Jim and Pam's dynamic is unreal. It's so absolutely believable that he fooled himself only on the surface level telling himself that he didn't even like Pam any longer let alone love her but at the first sign that something is not right with Pam his radar goes to work and he HAS to know. It's so dead on, even how he got mad at her in the break room in the earlier chapter. The MOST real thing is I can TOTALLY see once Jim fiinds out him breaking down the way he did (and subsequently breaking up with Karen since I'm sure the feelings evoked from all this easily uncovered for him that Karen was NEVER who he wanted and he needed to be free of and not worrying about Karen because first and foremost he needed to be available to be whatever Pam would let him be whenever she would let him be that. I think letting go of Karen was also one of Jim's ways of showing Pam that he wants to be there for her. Anyhow, him breaking down so completely, I can just see what Jim would go through in dealing with his imagination and thinking about anyone hurting and violating HIS perfect, lovely beautiful Pam. You hav evoked so much emotion, told such a powerful story.
I know MANY ave already done this but I'm BEGGING you, please come back and finish this story. I LOVE how it was just stating to come together, Jim was seeing that he IS making a difference and Pam admitted her feelings out loud even if Jim wasn't awake to hear it. (Though I wondered throughout that part if maybe Jim actually WAS awake but kept himself still because he wanted, no, NEEDED to hear evrything Pam ad to say!) PLEASE continue, I don't know that there is a more powerful story out there and this is begging to be finished!
Date: April 06, 2010 11:50 am Title: Weak
Wow. Please please please continue!!
Date: March 27, 2010 10:28 pm Title: Worry
please continue this :(
Date: March 15, 2010 02:10 am Title: Weak
please please please keep writing! I can't let this story go
Date: February 06, 2010 02:12 am Title: Weak
I hope you haven't forgotten about this story bcz I sure haven't! :) It's too good to be abandoned..please update? Pretty please with sugar on top?
8 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2010 03:12 pm Title: Worry
Love Love Love This (:
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2010 09:39 pm Title: Worry
PLEASE CONTINUE! I read this all in one sitting because it was so good, how is this your first story here??? I absolutely love this, the stories and just every aspect were so real - it was incredible. I really am evaluating all the good stuff I have in my life. This has been really helpful, so thank you.
Please continue, though. I know many people have asked you to do that and they're right. Please don't let this sit here untouched, it's too good to waste! Fantastic job with all these chapters, keep going!
Date: September 21, 2009 07:22 pm Title: Worry
I just read the story... I sat down and read it from beginning to end. For the past 4 hours or so I've been reading this story. You have no idea how awesome this was for me. I hope you haven't given up on it and that you are planing to finish it. (I know I'm being selfish here) But, my god you need to finish this cause it's sooo sooo good! Please promise you will finish it? Please?
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2009 07:37 pm Title: Worry
So I sat down at my computer, planning to read a few fanfics and leave. I came across this one, and read the first chapter. I have been obsessed ever since. I did not stop between any chapter and kept going, hoping it would never end.
I realized how much I miss normal Pam! I really, really can't wait for the chapter to come where they are completely honest with each other, face-to-face.
This story is amazing, bottom-line. You captured their emotions perfectly, and, though it was painful to read (as in, I don't like to read about them suffering to such a degree, but I can't help it because it's so good), it was really, really quite exceptional.
Amazing work, Athena. Amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2009 03:05 pm Title: Worry
This was really, good! you've got the emotions down and it made me teary eyed. loved it. can't wait for the next installment!
Date: July 21, 2009 07:45 am Title: Worry
I know this hasn't been updated in a while and probably won't be again (no matter how desperately I want it to :() I just felt the strong urge to comment on this beautiful story. I've just re read it and this time round, a lot of it really hit home and broke my heart in places. It's so wonderful and powerful and you capture the emotional complexities of both Pam and Jim incredibly. That passage that you quoted and the references to just not being able to be yourself again are sooo true and perhaps that's why it was so emotional for me to read again because of how much I can relate to it (Not exactly, but enough). Anyway, I just felt I needed to add a comment, commend you on this and plead that one day it will get finished. Thank you for this :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 11:10 pm Title: Worry
So this is the first story that I've read here on this site. I created an account just to read it. First review I've ever left for an Office fanfic.
Because it's amazingly well-written, and the angst is just right, and you're a great author and I really, really hope (with cherries on top) that you'll update it soon? c:
I'll look forward to reading more~!
- Cricket
9 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2009 03:59 pm Title: Weak
It's such a heartbreaking story. Please continue with this.
Date: April 16, 2009 05:10 pm Title: Weak
Yesterday was the 2 year anniversary from when this story was first published here..thought it'd be a good time to leave a review...love this story!
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Worry
love this story... wish there was more updates!
Date: March 05, 2009 08:34 pm Title: Worry
Are you kidding me? PLEASE CONTINUE THIS.