9 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2007 05:22 pm Title: Hurricane
Pam's entire response was so moving - but her last line actually gave me goosebumps. "If it doesn't make you shake, Jim... what's the point?"
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 06:45 am Title: Hurricane
Oh geez. Jim's last line was wonderful. :) Simply great :)
Date: April 18, 2007 10:25 pm Title: Hurricane
This is wonderful. What perfect lines you've given Pam:
"If it's just safe, you'd be lucky to wake up and realize you've only wasted ten years of your life."
And also:
"If it doesn't make you shake, Jim... what's the point?"
And the ending line from Jim? Perfection. And, of course, there's THE KISS. Sigh!
Date: April 18, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Hurricane
Nice. After I read the story, I went and downloaded the song and the lyrics. Jim is just too, too sexy.
Date: April 18, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Hurricane
Wow. A-may-zing. (/Kelly)
Date: April 18, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Hurricane
"If it doesn't make you shake, Jim... what's the point?"
Agreed. 100%
Thanks so much for this. It was lovely.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 18, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Hurricane
What a simple, lovely, swoon-inducing moment. Really a treat.
Date: April 18, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Hurricane
i REALLY love this! *sigh* there's nothing else to say. it's simply wonderful.
Date: April 18, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Hurricane
"Glad we're on the same page, Beesly." Love that.
Very cute. Enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2007 11:46 am Title: Hurricane
Oh I see how it is. You're going to do the story the proper way. :) It was sweet and well written, good job.
Author's Response:
LOL! Well, it was either this or secondrink's bobblehead version, but I figured I ought to give him/her (?) a chance to write it first! XD
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2007 11:46 am Title: Hurricane
Love it, love it! Jim was making me swoon! Thanks for writing this . . . it was fantastic!
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks! Yeah, Jim was making me swoon a bit, too... *fans self*
5 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2007 11:28 am Title: Hurricane
that was good! best way to put that line into a story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 18, 2007 11:28 am Title: Hurricane
It was my challenge and I declare using the whole awesome song NOT cheating. and p.s. SoCo is not a lame emo band...hehe
This. was. awesome. exactly what I was trying to do with the song before I tossed it away. I am so glad you picked it up, this really is great.
Author's Response:
Hey, that's Pam talking, not me! :P I'm not a big fan of Something Corporate, but those lyrics are absolutely amazing. I had actually started something else in response to just the line, but when I read the lyrics for the whole song, I had to ditch it and start over. XD
Glad you liked it!