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Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Both Sides of the Story- Jim and Pam

I really liked this chapter, and especially Jim and Emma together. Not that I want them to be together! Because I don't. I really don't. I just like them as friends. I think.

Oh no... I might actually want Jim and Emma to get together. Something must be wrong with my brain. Don't listen to me though. Proceed as planned. ;)

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Both Sides of the Story- Jim and Pam

Then I will gladly fill your tank. Please, please, please.....continue! I loved the 'hary little Buddha' comment.

Reviewer: Brunette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:50 am Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

yay more emma! is it my birthday or something?

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:30 am Title: Both Sides of the Story- Jim and Pam

You might want to insert a break after Pam and Emma are talking and then it switches to Jim and Emma talking; that was a little confusing :)  This is a fun idea for a story...it might be fun to be Emma in Scranton, getting people together and such.  Good times.

Reviewer: kth201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 07:53 am Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

I'm so glad this one is about Toby and has a happy ending! He's such a sad character on the show, and I love reading about someone who looks up to him. Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 06:05 am Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

I was wary when I saw this, because I'm a huge Emma fan (in fact, when I was about 18, I actually was Emma...the month before that, I was Isabel Archer...then I assumed my other Emma persona, Emma Bovary. As you can see, I'm a very suggestible reader.) Anyway, my concerns were unfounded - this is a terrific start and really fun. And Toby as Mr. Knightley? Who'da thunk it? Yet, perfect. Do continue, please.

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Yay Toby!  I like it so far.  I'm a huge fan of Jane Austen, and Emma is one of my favorite novels.  I'm interested in seeing this progress.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Toby! Yeah! (/Toby)

I really like Pam's deadpan "sits at the desk out front" and the line about History with a capital H. 

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

this is fun!  and I'm so glad you picked Toby!!

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Yeah, Toby!

This is going to be excellent Emma fic...can't wait for more!  An Emma-character is a great one to throw into Scranton; other Austen people aren't modern enough...other than Lizzy of course.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Ok, I am a philistine and have never read Emma, or P&P, or Anne of Green Gables.  But I'm all about someone meddling and making things 'right'.  So, I'm in for the ride!!

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Yay, Toby Knightly! I <3 Jane Austen and I can already tell I will love this. :)

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:49 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

WOW!!!! an advocate for Jam AND a love interest for Toby?!?!?! and my favorite name? wow... just, wow..

Reviewer: injoy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

now this, this could be something great.  can't wait to see where you go with it.

Reviewer: Brunette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

I was always just a "lurker" on this site before but reading this story made me register so that I could tell you how much I am already in love with it! I am a Jane Austen fanatic (surpassed only by my obsession with all things Jim and Pam, of course) and Emma is one of my favorites! I already love your Emma and I want Toby to have a happy ending as much as you do. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Prologue- Emma Arrives

Okay, I usually manage to contain my laughter when I'm reading around other people because they'll inevitably ask me what's so funny, but this:

She wants to take a hit out on Elliot’s life but she decides that may not be the smartest way to start a new career

just did me in.

That's not what I meant to say though, what I meant to say is: I am in love with this story and cannot wait for more! You totally just made my day.

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