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Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 04:53 pm Title: between how it is and how it should be

very sweet

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 07:20 pm Title: between how it is and how it should be

Wow.  This is just beautiful.  I'm working my way through all your stories.  They are all really good!  You do the inner voice so well.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 05:49 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

If he’s dead either way, he knows in which way he would rather go.

 I really like the voice you've created for Jim here. It sounds like him and really gets into his head. They're so sweet together and complement each other so perfectly. I like that you have their breakthrough come without many words- so much of what makes them special is unspoken.


Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 08:40 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

this was so wonderful and sweet and just great.

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 03:53 pm Title: between how it is and how it should be

Aww! That was your first Jim/Pam fic?! It was so sweet! Thank you!

Reviewer: WingWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 11:25 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

Please, Please write more Jim/Pam fic!  This was really amazing, in-character, sweet... I loved it!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 08:39 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

I LOVE THIS! LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 08:16 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

This is just so beautiful and so in-line with the characters.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 07:58 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

Very nice!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 07:46 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

is this really finished? b/c it's wonderful and i would love to see the consequences of this! it's really sweet and i can totally see this happening :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 06:26 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

this was beautiful -- I especially liked this: "and he wonders if they were always just one emotional breakdown away from back to normal"

Reviewer: Inanna3 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 03:32 am Title: between how it is and how it should be

This was sweet, and lovely, and real.

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