Date: January 01, 2009 09:19 am Title: Michael
There is only one review for these two chapters, because, this is my 2,009th review. On the first day 2009. Totally dorky. But awesome. At least to me.
Oh, Michael. Jan. You never make sense. Never. But still. You can't look away.
Author's Response: Hahaha! So that's why I got reviews for old stories. Well, okay, I'll take it. :) Happy New Year, mi amigo!
Date: April 21, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Michael
Hee! Great great great.
Author's Response:
Aw! Thanks thanks thanks. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Jan
Oh, this is some great characterization for both Jan and Michael! I liked this very much. And hey, if you want to write more M/J when you're feeling Jammed out, please feel free ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! It was pretty much my first real attempt at writing them, so I'm glad you thought it was in character. :)
Date: April 21, 2007 10:17 am Title: Michael
There can never be enough Michael/Jan fic! Poor Jan just trying to work up the courage to go inside...and Michael still so clueless. hahaha. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 20, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Michael
What a great last line!! I like all of it, and the detail of what Michael may be thinking, but that line is a clincher!
Where, though, is Michael's "and I also..." line? He had to become aware of what was actually happening to say that, right?
It's fun to revisit an episode like this in fanfic after a repeat! Makes for something different.
Author's Response: To me Michael seemed befuddled enough in that line to not really be thinking about what he's saying. So he still said it, but at the same time he was a little distracted by thoughts of their hotel room in Sandals, Jamaica. ;)
Date: April 20, 2007 05:57 pm Title: Jan
Nice background on Jan's thoughts! And you know, she does complete Michael, so - win/win.
I really like these lines "It's just sex, she reminded herself as she hit the lock button on her key. Everyone does it. No need to be immature about the issue."
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I honestly don't know where this story came from, but I figured I'd better get it out of my system and just get it over with. I guess Jan and I are alike in that way.