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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2007 09:29 pm Title: One for the record books

"...but also the night that Jim and Pam finally got it right."  What a beautiful line to end the story with.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Temporary Relief

"He would tell here that he was still in love with her and that she is the only one who can make him whole."  Such a romantic line, but I wonder if I would want to hear that from a hot, sweaty and stinky guy when I was hot and sweaty?  On second thought, if it was coming from Jim............

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:18 pm Title: One for the record books

Ah, finally. Well, it happened sooner than August in the show, but still, worth it. :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Plans

Haha. I loved guy talk and Michael's feminine problems. :). And yes, females are a different sex, not a different species Michael :)

I can't wait until the next chapter (yes, I know all I have to do is hit next)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:08 pm Title: Temporary Relief

Yeah, I think those would be emails I want to not red either. *shivers in disgust*

I like grape popsicles tooooo. Actually, I don't really like popsicles all that much because I get massive brain freeze really fast, and they hurt my teeth.

" He felt slightly stupid that he was currently jealous of a Popsicle." Yeah, that is so funny!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Dog Days

Okay, so ya know what - hot is hot. Humid is what makes me go crazy. I am so glad that it finally started raining, because, seriously, you walk outside, and you just FEEL the humidity. You can't do anything without breaking a sweat. Its still a cool summer here (won't be for much longer), but gah, humitity.
Okay, so I just wrote a paragraph on weather, and all I have read is the authors note... I guess its time for me to shut up and read.

So, of course, my memory is shot, but I remember somewhere (recently, you would think I would remember the place), but it was hotter INSIDE than outside. So, I would take a walk, and be sweaty and gross, and then come inside, and it was just worse. And not fun. Where was it though?

Aww, no kicking puppies. I am however, tormenting mine with a feather (they scare the begeesus out of her).

Reviewer: bealsa Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:04 pm Title: One for the record books

Aw, it was really sweet. I love the idea of them going back up to the roof and having a date that they'll both actually admit that is a date :) 

Reviewer: bealsa Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:40 am Title: Temporary Relief

Oh, poor Toby.

I've been laughing out loud at the Dwight moments. Great job! 



Author's Response: Haha, well I'm glad I could make you laugh! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:29 am Title: One for the record books

Great ending.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 10:40 pm Title: Temporary Relief

Oh this is fun. You've got Michael and Toby down pat and I love Jim's lilttle fantasy about Pam and "another" Popsicle. rofl

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Plans

Oh, I'm as frustrated as Pam and Jim! Darn that Michael! But can't wait to see how things go at 5:30!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Plans

"Feminine problems" - ha!

looking forward too - you mean 'to'

I like that both Pam and Jim realize their plans are not going to happen, and the Jim takes the initiative to make other plans!!!

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Plans

Aw, damn Michael sometimes.  You're doin' a great job really capturing their characters, though.  Update soon!

Reviewer: JamFan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Plans

This is soooo good!

More more more!!
Keep up the good work! It's so good. Did I already say that? tee hee!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Plans

Oooh, Jim has a surprise for Pam...after work too.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Plans

Oooh, you are evil!  Michael is so, Michael...

Reviewer: emmyred Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Plans

I love the happy JAM!  Pls update soon!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Temporary Relief

Hooray!  They both want to speak up!  I predict good things for the car.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Temporary Relief

Well, clearly, The Pamsicle Incident was bound to be sexy.  Poor Jim!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Temporary Relief

You're welcome.  But don't thank me. Thank the good people at the CAW who made up those rules.

Michael pointing out which of the to be destroyed secret emails would be best to read was hilarious.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 06:07 pm Title: Dog Days

WOOT!  I'm looking forward to some smutty lunch break sex in Pam's car! Cannot wait!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Temporary Relief

Is there going to be back seat - after prom sexin during lunch?  Cause I feel some coming on ;)  I think that Pam + Popsicle is Jim Halpert's kryptonite.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 04:27 pm Title: Dog Days

Cute idea for a story!  I love how you got everyone's voices down - especially Dwight. It sounded just like him.

Reviewer: uncgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Dog Days

This is a good concept and I can't wait to see where you are going with it.  Is it me, or is anyone else singing, "It's Getting Hot in Here"?  Good job.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2007 10:39 am Title: Dog Days

Poor Jim!  Sad because his one true love (read: human shield) is gone!  Next chapter:  Could things be heating up on the JAM front?  I like how they both noticed the sweat on the other...

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