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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2009 12:46 am Title: Chapter 13

*thud*

your story just killed me. in a good way. bravo.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2009 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

ok, normally i hate the fics that are mostly dialogue from an episode..... but GAH! THIS IS GOOD!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2009 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 13

flkjsdlsjlddjd < that is what you did to my brain lol

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2009 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

I am speechless, that was amazing.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2009 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy God you have killed me!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  I just read this start to finish throughout the entire afternoon.  Simply great.  I really loved the last couple chapters--the fact that they set rules.  Very sexy when they finally broke them : )  Great job.  I wish you would add an epilogue.  I would love to read about Monday at work...

Reviewer: chiquiti Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

for so much angst at the beginning i was hoping for more chapters of fluff, where she does indeed make him pancakes, or something .. but I will just go read another of your stories for my fix :-)

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 6

I really really like how Pam reviews her relationship with Roy. It's not bad. Roy's not bad. It's just something that she's probably outgrown. Very nicely done.

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Absolutely spot on characterizations!! It's painful but facinating. I can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow - this is probably my favorite interpretation of what was behind Jim's thoughts that night...it just feels right.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 13

 

wonderful chapter and very nicely done.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 12

That was wonderfully done.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

Very cute

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

Waiting for the happy part. On to the next chapter

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

Wow a considerate Michael, how refreshing.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow, Pam finally speaks up.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh Pam when are you going to come to grips with your true feelings.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 5

Can I comfort Jim?  I feel so bad for him.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Jim.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh my, tears are forming in my eyes over that chapter

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2006 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh poor jim

Reviewer: Boof Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2006 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok, so I've been saving this fic for my trip since it is so long. Now after only reading one chapter, I'm having to put it aside to go see Casino Night again! You described it with such detail and added such insight behind their words, that I feel that I'll see it in a new light. Or I just really want to see it again! ;-)
But I'll be back for the rest of the story! Can't wait!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 13

I am a naughty, naughty reviewer. *whisper* I just got back in town, and was curious, so I read only chapters 12 and 13. JESUS. The torture? And then the follow-through? Oof. Besides all the fucking amazing making-out-with-Jim awesomeness, I loved this line: "she...wanted to just make him lose control, make him feel as out of his mind with desire as she herself felt." Yes! Because he controls himself so well, it is such a turn-on to think of him losing control. Gah. OK, when I've gathered my strength again, I promise I'll read everything. Bad Shannon.

Author's Response: Well consider it payback, missy -- your supply closet story? Oh dear god. It HAUNTED me, right from the moment when you said that Jim loosened his tie....aaaahhhh! Glad you liked the last two chapters - hope you like the others! THey're angsty, but there's some steam in there, too. THanks for the review!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 11:37 am Title: Chapter 12

First off - I can't believe how much time and effort you put into this - truly amazing - very in character - I am floored. Truly.

Excellent, excellent job.

Second - HA! "Freakishly tall" came from me (it's from Beginnings). You may borrow it anytime - with my blessing. :)

....and LOL! at the TWoP reference.

Author's Response: Oh my god - that was yours!? I love your stuff! :o) And I'm so glad that you liked it! Yeah, I'm hoping that more of the TWoP crowd reads it, because I wrote those last two chapters with those ladies very much in mind.

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2006 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 13

Don't be embarassed, you did a fantastic job of writing 'dirty'. Sex is sex and everyone does it, sadly, everyone does not do it as well as your Jim and Pam. Sigh.

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