10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2009 08:48 pm Title: The Trust Bubble
What a great story--I loved it! You captured everyone's mannerisms perfectly!
Date: June 30, 2007 09:20 am Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Ok, I take back what I said last chapter, this is my new favorite. Very interesting seeing the rest of the office through someone else's eyes. And Toby went to the same doc? Haha...strange. And Roy coming was a nice touch. Very nicely written (the whole thing) and great characterizations. Sad to see it end! Thanks for writing!
Date: June 30, 2007 09:10 am Title: Role Playing
I think is my favorite chapter yet. I love them "being" each other. Just lovely.
Date: June 10, 2007 05:37 am Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
I enjoyed this story so much and awwww Toby! Lovely job.
Date: June 06, 2007 11:48 am Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Great job! I would love to have another chapter update... maybe how Pam gets over her fears and becomes a great mom. Loved it
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Date: June 06, 2007 01:32 am Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
I have a GPS tracking device in my car of you want to attach it to the child.
Ohhhh Dwight!
Loved the ending to the story!!
Date: June 05, 2007 11:55 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Family Counseling. Write it. NOW!!
I seriously fell in love with this story, I don't want it to be over. And I need more little tuna. :)
Date: June 05, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Great job. Well done.
Date: June 05, 2007 07:55 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
That was really wonderful. I've been quietly obsessed with this story since you began writing it. I loved the whole idea of this fic, it was so realistic and you did a wonderful job of giving Jim and Pam real complex issues. I also really liked that the story didn't end with a neat bow. You did a wonderful job writing two very interesting, complex people while still staying true to the characters of Jim and Pam. I can't wait to read whatever you write next!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
I do like this as and ending, but I would LOVE for you to continue this. You write it so well, you can change from a really seious topic to a fluffy or funny moment so well. I would really like to read more of this!!
Date: June 05, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Pleeeeeeeeeease don't let it be FIN. Let it be MAYBE...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. I so love this story. I don't want to see it end.
Date: June 05, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Epilogue: Dwight's Security Problem
Oh that was so cute. I can see Jim as the haggard new daddy and Pam being all unsure. I can't wait for the sequel--"Family Counseling" (wink wink)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 06:25 pm Title: Role Playing
I am so sad this story is about to end. I LOVE it. It is so good. I'm going to start my mourning period now even though I can't wait for the last chapter.
Date: June 05, 2007 09:27 am Title: Role Playing
Haha, Jim as Pam and Pam as Jim were adorably funny. I love Jim's "mixed media" of art and Pam's pillow issues.
Date: June 04, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Role Playing
Wow. I love this story so much. The character of Doc is awesome and your characterizations of Jim and Pam are spot-on. I can't wait to read the epilogue, but I am really sad to see this coming to an end. Thanks for sharing such a great story with us.
Date: June 04, 2007 10:38 am Title: Role Playing
Aw jeez, this is awesome! Pam/Jim play each other is almost as hilarious as Dwight/Jim playing each other. Only naughtier. Hee!
10 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2007 08:53 am Title: Role Playing
aawww... too cute.. love the banter and of course the role play. and i'm sorry, how can anyone resist a guy who can't leave dirty dishes in the sink?
Date: June 04, 2007 08:38 am Title: Redact that!
Is it sad that I'm getting my own relationship therapy from this story? Probably. But, doesn't matter. win-win. If you keep going like this, win-win-win.
Thank you, that is all.
Date: June 04, 2007 05:33 am Title: Role Playing
i love it! you've done such a great job with this story. the doc has become this jam-shipper that actually gets to interact with them and it's so much fun. and sweet of course :) great chapter!
Date: June 04, 2007 01:08 am Title: Role Playing
Great Chapter. You could see how this really did work out for them. They were so happy, themselves again. This was really a funny chapter to read with the role reversal.
Date: June 03, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Role Playing
Only one more? Seriously? I mean I realize that they don't need counseling but I really hope that there is some way that you can continue on with a story of their marriage, because I love how you write them as a couple!
Date: May 29, 2007 05:51 am Title: Weekend Retreat Prt 2: Teaching Tools
HAHAHA! ok so it's wonderful and hilarious and precious. mr. knell with his sweet margie... that was good for jim to hear.
also, that last line? wonderful and hilarious. thank you.
Date: May 28, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Nothing to talk about
I was laughing SO LOUD at the puppy's name... and the reasons why... that was GREAT!!! I only had a couple of thoughts... in an earlier chapter, you said "no cookie". Neither of them witnessed that interchange between dwight and angela, so would they know about that? I suppose if they've seen the documentary they have... I dunno. Just a thought. :) But I love it! keep it up!
Date: May 28, 2007 01:35 pm Title: Weekend Retreat Part One
It was great to see Pam & Jim so "normal" compared to the other couples. And I believe you were successful: it was humorous and realistic. Looking forward to the second half of the retreat!
Date: May 26, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Weekend Retreat Prt 2: Teaching Tools
HA I love that Jim found his Dwight within the group and got on that jerk's last nerve. He and Pam really are the most adorable couple and I'm glad that other hubby came up to Jim towards the end to let him know that what they had was real, very sweet if you ask me
Can't wait to read more soon!