1 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2018 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this. Your words make my heart hurt ;)
Date: March 02, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I'm crying and I'm not exactly sure why. This story was just so moving, and heartbreaking, and wonderful. I wish I could formulate a more eloquent review, but all I can really say is that I loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2007 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man. This is another one of those stories where I want to quote practically every line because there are so many really, really good ones. One, for example, was this: "But we were standing in the parking lot and your eyes were- And I was drunk." I seriously love this because with all of the context, I know exactly what look you're talking about and you didn't even have to describe it whatsoever -- it's like it's this indescribably look, which fits perfectly. I also love the line about how she's not supposed to touch him and how he'd have understood what she wanted even if she hadn't said anything, even if she'd just looked at him. And! Lastly, my other favorite line was how she's "never felt anything so close to love as this and that's a horrible thought because [she's] been engaged for three years." I know this review is not being helpful or thoughtful at all, but all of those lines are so beautiful and meaningful and wonderfully written... this piece is just amazing. The title is great as well, not only because it fits literally with the story what with the darkness and Jim's silhouette over her, but also metaphorically in that silhouettes are ambiguous and representative... just lovely. Amazing job with this.
10 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2006 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO beautiful and heartbreaking.
I love : And I’ve never felt anything so close to love as this and that’s a horrible thought because I’ve been engaged for three years.
Oh, Pam. Sigh.
Date: September 21, 2006 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
i just wanted to sy - beautiful story. also, i find it interesting that you wrote about pam using alcohol for an excuse as to why she's kissing jim when she knows it's not true. are you some sort of psychic because pam def. used that excuse in the season 3 opener. spooooooky! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this. And when she started to beg him to just kiss her, I almost lost it. Beautiful story.
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
And then what happens???
8 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2006 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
And then what happens???
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 04:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This has always been one of my favorites--even though it kills me every time.
9 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2006 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
"I’m just me. I’m Pam, but maybe not so reserved or inhibited. I’m just me, finally doing what I want for once." Love this line and this fic.
9 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is brutal, raw, and real. Oh, Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story - it's one of my favorites. Beautifully written.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1
So hot, and then sad, and then...hopeful? Wow.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
For some reason I like this even better than the second time around. I loved it the first time, but rereading just shows me how much I remembered and liked it. Always been a favorite.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2006 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this the first time I read it, love it now. I think it's very realistic, that if they did give in and go home together, it wouldn't all be smooth sailing. This: “I’ll put my bra back on. If that’ll- Please.” is hearbreaking. I also like how the end is a little vague (to me at least, not sure if you intended it that way): is Jim angry, embarrassed, hopeful?