Date: May 29, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this - it was creative and very well-written. Your exposition of the characters and the situation was fantastic.
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! :D
Date: August 12, 2007 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so great, I loved it! Your Andy voice was absolutely spot on, as was everyone else. I loved the little moment between Andy and Pam in the elevator, sweet yet just a tiny bit freaky. And the hand motion when he told her to call him, so Andy. "You got my digits?" cracked me up too. This fic is so full of wonderful! I loved it!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much! :D
Date: May 09, 2007 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Andy! And wow - I love that moment of insight and ingenuousness that you gave him. Maybe Pam SHOULD go out with him once... At least she'd have another memory with a party and sombreros. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: May 08, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. It has a very quiet quality to it. The whole love triangle thing is still sitting out there, framing the main action- it's clear that Pam's whole focus is on Jim/Karen even when she's talking to Andy, but you do it subtly. Andy is a weird tragi-comic character anyway, and you capture his character beautifully. Bravo!
Author's Response: Wow, what a great review! Thank you so much!
Date: May 07, 2007 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Fun! My favorite part was everything with the neck, especially "Jim's neck said that he did, but not right now. Maybe not with her? Jim's neck made less sense these days, as did the idea that she could read his moods on it."
I can imagine Andy in your story; I think you did a good job with him. I got a kick out of "You got my digits?"
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
Date: May 06, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
So ... so perfect! Oh my God, Andy's dialogue was just ... spot on! I could hear his voice in my head as he's talking to Pam. I LOVE IT! And the fact that he knows, OMG. Ha. My favorite line, though?
"I just moved here a few months ago, and I kind of effed that up. Little too enthusiastic. My girlfriend just broke up with me. I think I committed a felony. Maybe two."
A little too enthusiastic? Committed a felony?? HAHAHAHA. I think I'm going to die now. Awesome. More Andy fic, please!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :D :D :D