9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 09:38 am Title: Autumn
I'm seriously hooked on this story. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Done! Once I posted the "almost awake" chapter I just HAD to post the next one!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 08:49 am Title: Autumn
Yay! He's stirring! :) This is so well done. I love the way you're developing Pam into an independent, self-aware person. If you really need that support group, I'm here to talk it out. :)
Author's Response: Maybe I just love Jim so much I don't think Pam's worthy until she makes a few changes! It's something I'll have to work out in the support group... Thanks for your words of encouragement.
Date: August 04, 2006 11:14 pm Title: August
This is really great and I REALLY want Jim to wake up! Great job!
Author's Response: I want him to wake up too! Thanks ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 07:54 pm Title: The Awakening
Poor Pam. And the thought of Jim waking up to find Pam calling his mom "Mom" feels really surreal, even to the reader. Great job, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Poor Pam, indeed! She'll get what she wants in the end. She just has to work for it!
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 02:51 pm Title: The Awakening
Great sequence of dreams - love the awakening - can't wait to read the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'd probably already be done with this story but I can't seem to stop reading and re-reading "Hope"!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 11:36 am Title: August
Pam watching the video was bittersweet. And you're right, wasn't expecting that kind of smut but it did fit in. I thought she'd be ravishing him in the hospital bed! Hope Jim wakes up soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for all your feedback! And don't worry, he'll be awake soon. And there may yet be some ravishing...
Date: August 02, 2006 02:54 pm Title: The Longest Day
I love that she is reading to him. I'm glad Jim's family is so welcoming to her. Great story, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2006 09:18 am Title: The Longest Day
WOW - That man needs to wake up! You're killing me! This is really beautifully written, and so heartbreaking - love the little details: her putting on his tee-shirt, using his Old Spice, his dreams at the beginning.... Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm a huge fan of your writing so that means a lot. And we know Jim will wake up, but I need to let Pam twist in the wind a bit first. It's my evil nature!
9 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 01:05 pm Title: The Waiting Begins
Beautiful job. Tense, suspenseful and sad. Keep going!
Author's Response: I will. Lord help me, I can't seem to stop! Or get any work done...
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2006 12:47 pm Title: The Waiting Begins
I loved this line - "Snuggled into her own little Jim cocoon, she relaxed for the first time in hours." Such a great story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm just wishing I had my own little "Jim cocoon"!
Date: July 28, 2006 07:08 pm Title: May 12th
Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 03:42 pm Title: May 12th
Oh! This is so good. Thanks for the first part, because thinking he isn't going to wake up would be really depressing :)
Author's Response: I agree-- I probably wouldn't read it if I thought it ended like that!
9 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 01:09 pm Title: May 12th
If you are going to make me cry during every chapter I might just have to keep reading.
Author's Response: I promise to TRY not to make you cry during every chapter! LOL
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 08:39 am Title: May 11th
Wow, what an awesome story! I loved reading about Jim's dream - that was so very well written. Can't wait to read more. Definitely adding to my favorites!
Author's Response: Thanks! Things have to turn out better in his dreams...
9 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2006 08:16 am Title: May 11th
So sad, you made me tear up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! All I can say is- keep your tissues handy for now...