Date: May 11, 2007 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4: The Accident
i like this chapter, how he rushes to take care of her. so precious!
Date: May 11, 2007 10:00 am Title: Chapter 4: The Accident
I liked this one. A lot. That's all I'm saying.
Date: May 11, 2007 06:44 am Title: Chapter 3: The Attempt
Great fic. I will keep thinking for a fantasy but so far the ones you wrote are great.
Date: May 10, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Attempt
Your fic is the best one here in a while. I'm absolutely addicted.
The idea is very hot and very fun, definately something I've wanted to read for sometime. You've also written it very well. The language is not over the top, not too detailed or artsy-fartsy as sadly some fics' is; to be fair I almost didn't "see" the language while reading - it was that natural and well-written.
Basically, a big thank you - for a great idea that was superbly developed.
Can't wait for the updates, and more work from you.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for all of the compliments! I am extremely flattered and very glad that you are so pleased! :D
Date: May 09, 2007 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease
Dang. This is HOT! Keep going!
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease
nice dialogue/email. I have no suggestions at this point, but I am enjoying what you've done so far.
Date: May 09, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Tease
Wow!
They should have descret online sex in the middle of the office.
Hot for us readers, hilariously uncomfortable with the other people in the office....
just a suggestion...
Date: May 09, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2: The Tease
HAAAaaaa! This is great, I can't believe she actually wore knee socks to the office...I agree with keeping up the little teasing bits for awhile, I think it could be fun to see how many times Jim can spit water all over himself :o)
Date: May 09, 2007 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation
Oh definitely further fantasies and more back and forth emailing or IM. I love how Pam is pushing him.
Date: May 08, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation
i can think of a lot of suggestions....which scares me a little. who knew i could come up with random stuff like that so quickly? so in spite of my fear that i will sound utterly sex crazed and also the fear that these are completly cliche:
Jim's Possible Fantasies:
1. The roof - during the day
2. Dwight's Desk (the ultimate prank even though he shies away from putting anything to do with Dwight into a sexual situation)
3. Nurses - they care
4. Watching Pam paint
Pam's Fantasies:
1. Drawing Jim in the nude - for purely altruistic reasons of course ;-)
2. Phone sex/instant messenger sex at the office during work hours
3. Boys in uniform (aka military as opposed to like postal worker...or student)
4. Jim after playing basketball - she was inspired after the game between the office and the warehouse, sweaty jim was so much more appealing than sweaty roy
5. Surprising Jim in Stamford
6. Coming home to find Jim waiting for her after he'd moved to Stamford
Author's Response:
All wonderful suggestions! :D Thank you!
I'm really trying to think of some good ones for Pam. Probably because female fantasies are so much different from the typical "male" fantasies. But I really liked some of the suggestions that you made!
Thanks again for the comment!
Date: May 08, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation
Hee! I love this concept. My idea would be to have her dress like a schoolgirl for the last chapter -- but for her to keep asking questions and enacting small things - like not wearing underwear, or wearing a garter belt (his fantasy could be imagining what is under her skirt, and she gives him tantalising little peeks)...her fantasy could be running her fingers through the hair on the back of his neck, so he teases her by doing it in front of her...or she could have a fantasy about him ravishing her on her desk, so he teases her by brushing across her as she leans over her desk, talking to Michael...
I would build up the tension with smaller acts, before getting to the whole enchilada -- but that's just me.
However you decide to continue, I'll be reading!
Author's Response:
I LOVE all of those ideas! They're all gold! :)
Thanks and keep reading!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation
YES! jam + fantasies + email banter = GOLD
continue, continue!
Date: May 08, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: The First Initiation
reinact it out, jim!! reinact it!!