Date: September 23, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Let tears and burning blushes speak the rest.
Oh my...
Please Please Please! Write moreeee!!
Date: August 13, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Let tears and burning blushes speak the rest.
Yikes! Pregnant - now that's a significant change that would have an obvious impact on how things turned out for them. Didn't expect that...
Author's Response:
All things will be revealed in due time. :)
Hope you're still on board! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: August 12, 2007 07:55 am Title: the Spouse prepares the bridal ring
Ohhhh, the idea that they would have had that confrontation on her wedding day absolutely pains me! I am enjoying the angst, but I'm glad less angsty stuff is most likely coming!
Author's Response: yes less angsty stuff will be coming.... sometime :) haha but I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review and reading!
Date: August 10, 2007 08:18 pm Title: the Spouse prepares the bridal ring
Hi, WildBerryJam! I'm the author of the other Eternal Sunshine fic, and I love what you're doing here. Poor Jim, though. I think, with all the angst these two have gone through, the idea behind Eternal Sunshine really fits in well. I wonder how you're going to address the mind erase and its implications. I'm struggling to write what will probably be the last chapter now. If you have a chance to read mine and have some input I'd be happy to hear it. All the best with your continuing story!
One of my favorite lines from this chapter (what a great, simple way to say something powerful): "She hugged me, but not in the way that you would want someone to hug you."
Author's Response: questionforyou I loved your story too! It's just great. The mind erase and it's implications will be addressed again later :) I still have a few ideas before we get to the ending. Thanks for the kind words and I can't wait to see what happens in your version too! If you need any help don't be afraid to contact me and we can discuss! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 04:45 pm Title: the Spouse prepares the bridal ring
AH! Now I feel silly...IT WAS YOU!! :)
There's the other story floating around that's using Eternal Sunshine as the plot, and I haven't read that one, but I've been waiting for this one to be updated...haha. I was wondering what happened to this story. And you've been around the whole time. :)
Still loving the story. And I don't mind the angst at all. I need some angst in my life to balance out all of the really happy first date fics out there.
Author's Response:
Haha, yep, that's me, TMIKIS! :) I'm so glad you like it! Writer's block is no fun. So I finally got decided to rewatch the movie and got over it and got around to posting this little ditty again :)
Angst is necessary at times yes. But so is fluff so it all works out in the end. And we will have fluff soon too, so have no fear! More to come.
Date: June 13, 2007 05:38 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
I don't know if you planned on finishing this story, but I would really love it if you did. I adore the bittersweet reality of the movie, and your story does it immense justice so far.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking it. I am planning on finishing it, I'm just having some trouble with the next chapters. I do have plans to finish it tho! Thanks for the review, so happy you are enjoying the bittersweetness of it!
Date: May 19, 2007 11:56 am Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns
Loving it and looking forward to more! :)
Date: May 14, 2007 11:00 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns
Sob! The very idea of Jim erasing Pam is just...weep! And yet, update? Please?
Date: May 14, 2007 10:56 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
No, two months is puh-lenty long enough, Pam! Go for it!
9 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 08:15 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns
I really like it. It might follow Eternal Sunshine a bit too closely? But really, that's just this chapter, and you need to build into it somehow. :) I just wish the chapter was longer!
Author's Response: It's true that it is very close to Eternal Sunshine but it was mostly for those who haven't seen the movie. After this point, Jim's memories will be coming and those are not at all like the movie. I'm glad you like it! thanks for the review and keep reading! more will be coming soon!
Date: May 14, 2007 07:58 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns
Well, I like it! I just wanted to apologize again for the excessive commenting. I'm not usually that verbose. I really don't know what's gotten into me today...
Seriously though, this was great! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
yay Azlin! I loved your comments and they did help! It's nice to get some variety of opinions. I'm so glad you liked it! more will be coming your way ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: May 14, 2007 07:32 pm Title: ever-musing melancholy reigns
I admit to not having seen this movie. It's one of those that I really want to see, but real life is too sad, I don't think I can stand to watch it. Having said that, I am so hooked on this story. It's so well written, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks Jen74! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: May 13, 2007 07:00 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
Well, this is interesting and potentially confusing, but I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it!
Date: May 08, 2007 08:55 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
I haven't seen the movie, but I know the general concept. This is interesting; I'll be interested to see what happens next and how it is they forgot each other, how Jim thinks he's been there only 4 months, etc. (Maybe only back from Stamford...?)
Author's Response: Thanks Too Late Kev, more will be coming and all your questions will be answered!! :) Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2007 06:54 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
You already read my comments on this but I wanted to rate it so good job, vair interesant, update soon. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I will be working on it v. soon! :)
Date: May 08, 2007 06:15 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
Love the last line. It made the story for me. Good work.
Date: May 08, 2007 05:49 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
As someone who is OBSESSED with Eternal Sunshine, I am SO excited to see where you will go with this. I love that you don't know what happened to Jim and Pam in the past to bring them to this point. I can't wait to see how you weave everything together to tell the whole story. Great start!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it dramaqueen! I figured it's best to begin it with their memories erased and that's basically how the movie starts soooo. yeah. There is a ton to be weaved together to lead them to this point and it will be posted soon! :) Glad you enjoyed and reviewed!
Date: May 08, 2007 05:49 pm Title: The World Forgetting By The World Forgot
hmm...interesting...
in a good way.
i thought that they had both gotten their memories of each other erased at first but no...
just my imagination going wild...
or IS it?
Author's Response: No, they have gotten their memories erased at this point. I'll be going back and explaining it all soon. :) This story (and the movie) makes my head spin thinking about it! Thanks for reviewing!